Contest: Phoenix sixain, sponsored by Suzette Richards, Written 6/28/26.
A light warm breeze tickles my nose with sweet perfumes of a freshly bloomed rose A hummingbird zips by and feeds from blooms Another one joins as they zip and zoom Embracing the moment, not feeling gloom A sweet hummingbird joins along embracing (Excerpt from " A relaxing Moment with Nature" Written and posted 2/19/26)
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