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A Sweaty Young Man

He came riding in from Coahuila A sweaty young man with a thirst intense He drank a whole quart of raw tequila Neither he nor his hoss have been seen since - Please watch for Fred and his hoss is Sheila November 4, 2016 For Contest 5 line Max

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Charlie Smith

Date: 11/5/2016 9:20:00 AM

There's one town I missed, Coahulia. I don't miss those lost tequila weekends though...

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:32:00 PM

You may have been to Coahuila whilst drinking Tequila, Charlie! Tequila is not known as an event that builds memories to look back on!!...good to hear from you...Larry

Paloma P

Date: 11/5/2016 7:17:00 AM

Was his hoss Sheila drinking raw tequila too? :) Fun read Larry, good luck!

Larry Bradfield
Date: 11/6/2016 9:38:00 PM

Sheila drank raw Tequila from a pail...Turmed her black that's a fact,normally she's pale Thanks, Paloma