Larry Bradfield Poet Rhyme

A Sweaty Young Man

He came riding in from Coahuila
A sweaty young man with a thirst intense
He drank a whole quart of raw tequila
Neither he nor his hoss have been seen since -
Please watch for Fred and his hoss is Sheila 

November 4, 2016
For Contest 5 line Max

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Charlie Smith November 5, 2016 at 9:20 AM There's one town I missed, Coahulia. I don't miss those lost tequila weekends though... Larry Bradfield November 6, 2016 at 9:32 PM You may have been to Coahuila whilst drinking Tequila, Charlie! Tequila is not known as an event that builds memories to look back on!!...good to hear from you...Larry

Paloma P November 5, 2016 at 7:17 AM Was his hoss Sheila drinking raw tequila too? :) Fun read Larry, good luck! Larry Bradfield November 6, 2016 at 9:38 PM Sheila drank raw Tequila from a pail...Turmed her black that's a fact,normally she's pale Thanks, Paloma