A Swarm

a swarm
under porch light ~
night crew takes over



Submitted on January 9, 2021 for contest HI-KU (6) PLACE PROMISE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/11/2021 1:20:00 PM
your haiku are always exceptional line, many congrats on your top spot;-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2021 9:02:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. You're very kind. I've had more than my share of misses. lol
Date: 6/22/2018 6:23:00 PM
Ending with a really good one . I got a lot of comments caught up today. Got most of my grades done for school. It was a great day!! And now to my dishes piled in the sink and hopefully some Netflix while I jump on my mini trampoline!! SEe ya , Line.
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Date: 6/22/2018 7:43:00 PM
Thanks for visiting. Have fun, Andrea. Early night for me too.
Date: 6/22/2018 1:36:00 PM
Perfect image Line, I can just see it. Tom.
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:27:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 6/22/2018 11:02:00 AM
I like this a lot, Line-- a true haiku!
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:29:00 PM
Thanks, L.J. Gotta go back and fix many of my earlier ones. LOL
Date: 6/22/2018 10:31:00 AM
Yes indeed :) xomo!
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Date: 6/22/2018 2:29:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Maureen. Much appreciated.
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