A Swarm

a swarm
under porch light ~
night crew takes over



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on January 9, 2021 for contest HI-KU (6) PLACE PROMISE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Allison Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:20 PM
your haiku are always exceptional line, many congrats on your top spot;-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Thanks, Jan. You're very kind. I've had more than my share of misses. lol
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Ending with a really good one . I got a lot of comments caught up today. Got most of my grades done for school. It was a great day!! And now to my dishes piled in the sink and hopefully some Netflix while I jump on my mini trampoline!! SEe ya , Line.
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Thanks for visiting. Have fun, Andrea. Early night for me too.
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 1:36 PM
Perfect image Line, I can just see it. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:27 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Tom.
Carber Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 11:02 AM
I like this a lot, Line-- a true haiku!
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Thanks, L.J. Gotta go back and fix many of my earlier ones. LOL
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Yes indeed :) xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Maureen. Much appreciated.
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