A Swallowed Cry

A Swallowed Cry

                                  The dawn is smothered in haze as I
                               watch the sun wrap with wings of gold
                                        I swallow a swallowed cry.

                                 As I watch his soul melt within the clouds
                                 my memory lingers of our two intertwining
                                    hearts sharing silk kisses I swallow
                                               A swallowed cry.

                                Nature is laughing with sweet serenades
                                 as I listen with the anchor of my soul.

                                My heart is tangled inside, Still waters run
                                deep, As broken promises lies my paradise
                                 my friendship is for keeps, yet you should
                                       Know I swallow a swallowed cry.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 3:19 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Cheryl and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:26 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 1:47 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Cheryl! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 11:07 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 9, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Many congrats on your featured poem this week. Rgds Janette
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December 9, 2009 at 3:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. Nutter
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2009 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cheryl. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2009 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured >> James
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December 7, 2009 at 12:13 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! ***Danielle***
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December 6, 2009 at 2:01 PM
Beautifully done, Cheryl. Congratulations on your writing being featured this week here at the Soup!!
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March 10, 2009 at 6:12 AM
Oh how I can relate. Great write. continue to share and thank you for commenting on my work. I shall visit you more.
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March 2, 2009 at 2:59 AM
So open and very beautiful. The language itself, so flowing and has a majestic flow as it should. Extrememly well written! I can relate to this work of yours well... Nicely done. Your friend in poetry, Lucinda
Ginn Avatar
March 1, 2009 at 2:38 AM
Very moving write. I love the last verse Cheryl.
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