A Surprise Upon Awakening

I woke up 
and in the mirror, 
saw a stranger-- 
a face not mine, 
but like my own. 
So I wondered: 
Am I mad now?

But no...
if you think you're insane, 
you're not-- 
the mind's own Catch-22. 

Still... 
why did this face seem 
to belong to another? 
I sensed my soul at work: 
not quite done with its 
nightly dream-making, 
weaving entire worlds
from strands of memory--
bits of ego--
clouds of imagination.

My soul was seeing my flesh 
as it really exists-- merely a
convenient container designed 
to navigate life and this world
of the temporary, 
the fleeting, 
the lessening shadows.

And so my immortal part 
gave its living doppelganger 
a great and wondrous gift:
This is what you really are 
as flesh and bone--
a waxen mold, 
a vanity, 
almost an illusion ....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Marc Avatar
April 1, 2020 at 11:44 PM
A wonderful poem ~ congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 2:14 PM
Thank you. my friend--take care in these fraught times!
Ashley Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 11:35 PM
Hi L.J. an interesting and intense poem. Well done. Congratulations on your win!
Carber Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Thanks Susan, I appreciate your kind words.
Oakley Avatar
November 2, 2015 at 9:06 PM
That was deep
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