Robert L. Hinshaw Poet Haiku

A Supplication

Trees lift barren limbs

          As if in supplication

                    Pray for Spring's return

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 4 in Raul Moreno's Tranquility Contest

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Barbara Gorelick April 18, 2010 at 3:41 PM Im so proud of you Bob, your doing so well with this form. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG

Skat A April 18, 2010 at 3:15 PM Nice haiku, thanks for the comment on my _GET FAR POEM_ good day Bob h. Enjoyed thanks and have a wonderful day, S.k.a.t.

Amy Green April 17, 2010 at 10:26 PM Really nice job on this one, Bob!

John Freeman April 17, 2010 at 9:32 PM Congratulations on your place Robert. Agape, Moses

Audrey Haick April 17, 2010 at 2:06 PM Congratulations, dear Robert on your 4th place win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest! Great imagery here. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 17, 2010 at 1:52 PM Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. amazing words for the photo and a wonderful win for u my friend.. u are becoming quite the Haiku poet now.. luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire April 17, 2010 at 12:46 PM Great poem and a well-deserved placement in the contest. Congratulations, Bob! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards April 17, 2010 at 12:28 PM Congratulations, Robert, on your win in Raul's contest! Well deserved! ~ Love, Carrie

Raul Moreno April 17, 2010 at 11:57 AM Robert, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Poet Destroyer A April 17, 2010 at 10:29 AM Nice one, Bob H. a haiku . Good luck in the contest. I really am pleased with your comment this morning. P.d.

Iolanda Scripca April 16, 2010 at 11:05 PM Original Haiku describing the picture Raul provided for the contest. Good luck. All the best, Iolanda

Ralph Taylor April 16, 2010 at 6:50 PM Good one, Bob. Good luck in the contest.

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2010 at 5:33 PM Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara

Poet Destroyer A April 16, 2010 at 4:44 PM A very nice haiku you have here Mr. Hinshaw. . .P.D.

Laura Mckenzie April 16, 2010 at 4:40 PM Robert~ A wonderful entry for the contest best wishes i enjoyed this! Laura :)

Carolyn Devonshire April 16, 2010 at 4:32 PM Very eloquently stated, Bob. I wish you success in the contest and hope you will check out Washington's Wailing Wall, my poem about the Vietnam Veteran's Memorial in Washington. I thought of you and others who served as I wrote it. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico April 16, 2010 at 4:25 PM very nice.. great words