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A Supplication

Trees lift barren limbs As if in supplication Pray for Spring's return Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved) Placed No. 4 in Raul Moreno's Tranquility Contest

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Date: 4/18/2010 3:41:00 PM
Im so proud of you Bob, your doing so well with this form. Congrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 4/18/2010 3:15:00 PM
Nice haiku, thanks for the comment on my _GET FAR POEM_ good day Bob h. Enjoyed thanks and have a wonderful day, S.k.a.t.
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Date: 4/17/2010 10:26:00 PM
Really nice job on this one, Bob!
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Date: 4/17/2010 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your place Robert. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/17/2010 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Robert on your 4th place win in Raul's "Tranquility" Contest! Great imagery here. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 4/17/2010 1:52:00 PM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. amazing words for the photo and a wonderful win for u my friend.. u are becoming quite the Haiku poet now.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:46:00 PM
Great poem and a well-deserved placement in the contest. Congratulations, Bob! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2010 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert, on your win in Raul's contest! Well deserved! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:57:00 AM
Robert, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/17/2010 10:29:00 AM
Nice one, Bob H. a haiku . Good luck in the contest. I really am pleased with your comment this morning. P.d.
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Date: 4/16/2010 11:05:00 PM
Original Haiku describing the picture Raul provided for the contest. Good luck. All the best, Iolanda
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Date: 4/16/2010 6:50:00 PM
Good one, Bob. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:33:00 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest..Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing.. Sara
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:31:00 PM
nice~Ejoyed~~~~~Good luck Robert ! Rick parise~~~~~~salem , Oregon
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:44:00 PM
A very nice haiku you have here Mr. Hinshaw. . .P.D.
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:40:00 PM
Robert~ A wonderful entry for the contest best wishes i enjoyed this! Laura :)
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:32:00 PM
Very eloquently stated, Bob. I wish you success in the contest and hope you will check out Washington's Wailing Wall, my poem about the Vietnam Veteran's Memorial in Washington. I thought of you and others who served as I wrote it. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:25:00 PM
very nice.. great words
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