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A Sunshine Quest

Sunrise golden hour was fading Gemmed hummingbirds called on red blooms Jade new day sparkled in wonder. Songs from pine trees gushed cascading the still air heavy with perfumes; Unrecalled were days of thunder. A lush garden, blooms invading for hummingbirds in sweet costumes as bronze sun grew hot way under. Juicy cherries were pervading like the bold rainbow which presumes casting the grim storms asunder. Soon off to be quite well traveled Before day, in hues unraveled. Written on 6/1/2023 For: Trilonnet Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May Image number 3

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Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2023 5:23:00 AM

Wonderful write Evelyn, Congrats on your win

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/26/2023 10:11:00 AM

Thank you so much. It was a great pleasure to take part in your delightful contest. I hope you have a wonderful week.

John Loving Iii

Date: 6/7/2023 7:04:00 PM

Looking for things I see; they're there. in the poetic context.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/7/2023 8:26:00 PM

Thank you so much for your thoughts. :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2023 7:21:00 PM

Quite the 'trillonet,' Evelyn. Here's to 'persuading' the contest sponsor of its worthiness in the winner's circle! :) gw

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/5/2023 8:54:00 PM

Many thanks for the lovely remarks and good wishes, Gershon.

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/4/2023 7:42:00 AM

My friend Evelyn, your poem is a magnificent work of art. Your vivid imagery, combined with the portrayal of hummingbirds, is simply outstanding. I have always been captivated by these peculiar creatures - so tiny, yet so diligent in their endeavors.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2023 11:46:00 AM

There is so much to admire in our beautiful, natural, colorful world. Thank you for your very nice remarks.

David Mchattie

Date: 6/4/2023 4:56:00 AM

I've always been fascinated by hummingbirds. A truly odd creature. So small and they work so hard. You combine them with your usual wonderful imagery. A fantastic poem my friend. have a great day.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 6/4/2023 11:43:00 AM

Hummingbirds are truly amazing. They can fly straight up and down, backwards and forwards. Thank you for your kind words.