Evelyn Judy Buehler Poet Rhyme

A Sunshine Quest

Sunrise golden hour was fading
Gemmed hummingbirds called on red blooms
Jade new day sparkled in wonder.

Songs from pine trees gushed cascading
the still air heavy with perfumes;
Unrecalled were days of thunder.

A lush garden, blooms invading
for hummingbirds in sweet costumes
as bronze sun grew hot way under.

Juicy cherries were pervading
like the bold rainbow which presumes
casting the grim storms asunder.

Soon off to be quite well traveled
Before day, in hues unraveled.


Written on 6/1/2023
For: Trilonnet Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
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Joseph May June 26, 2023 at 5:23 AM Wonderful write Evelyn, Congrats on your win Evelyn Judy Buehler June 26, 2023 at 10:11 AM Thank you so much. It was a great pleasure to take part in your delightful contest. I hope you have a wonderful week.

John Loving Iii June 7, 2023 at 7:04 PM Looking for things I see; they're there. in the poetic context. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 7, 2023 at 8:26 PM Thank you so much for your thoughts. :)

Gershon Wolf June 5, 2023 at 7:21 PM Quite the 'trillonet,' Evelyn. Here's to 'persuading' the contest sponsor of its worthiness in the winner's circle! :) gw Evelyn Judy Buehler June 5, 2023 at 8:54 PM Many thanks for the lovely remarks and good wishes, Gershon.

Sotto Poet June 4, 2023 at 7:42 AM My friend Evelyn, your poem is a magnificent work of art. Your vivid imagery, combined with the portrayal of hummingbirds, is simply outstanding. I have always been captivated by these peculiar creatures - so tiny, yet so diligent in their endeavors. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 11:46 AM There is so much to admire in our beautiful, natural, colorful world. Thank you for your very nice remarks.

David Mchattie June 4, 2023 at 4:56 AM I've always been fascinated by hummingbirds. A truly odd creature. So small and they work so hard. You combine them with your usual wonderful imagery. A fantastic poem my friend. have a great day. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 11:43 AM Hummingbirds are truly amazing. They can fly straight up and down, backwards and forwards. Thank you for your kind words.

Vijay Pandit June 4, 2023 at 4:46 AM Your poem brings forth the image given described in beauty and tenor of your words. Superb write in this hard to execute form, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 11:38 AM Many thanks for your kind appreciation.

Victor Buhagiar June 4, 2023 at 2:33 AM The perfect fragrance of pine trees, the melodies of hummingbirds. All evoke for a lovely vision. Great lines, Evelyn. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 11:37 AM Thank you for the pleasure of your comment.

Yann Rolland June 4, 2023 at 12:43 AM i love hummingbirds too, thanks for the vivid and colored scené, enjoyed yann Evelyn Judy Buehler June 4, 2023 at 11:31 AM Thank you for the delightful comment, Yann.

Kim Rodrigues June 3, 2023 at 6:21 PM Songs from pine trees gushed cascading the still air heavy with perfumes… Juicy cherries were pervading…very nice, Evelyn! Evelyn Judy Buehler June 3, 2023 at 7:24 PM Your appreciation is very gladdening. Thank you.

Leo Larry Amadore June 3, 2023 at 6:08 PM I enjoyed reading your poem this evening. Good luck with the contest. Evelyn Judy Buehler June 3, 2023 at 7:23 PM Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and well wishes, Leo.