Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

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A Sunset Rainbow Tableau

blue and silver clouds
behind a rainbow
where marmalade spreads
over yellow sun
as blue-green laps sand -
welcoming twilight

March 19, 2021
for Joseph May's Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Contest

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Tom Cunningham March 28, 2021 at 2:19 PM Love how you've interpreted the image Andrea. Tom

Supraja Kannan March 27, 2021 at 2:54 AM You have painted a beautiful scenery, Andrea... Loved it...

David Kavanagh March 26, 2021 at 3:45 PM Heya Andrea back with congratulations, I knew this one was a winner first time I read it, brilliant combination of imagery description and picture, cheers David

David Mohn March 26, 2021 at 3:20 PM Stunning description Andrea...lovely :) Congratulations

Paula Goldsmith March 26, 2021 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. I would love that picture. Have a blessed day/weekend..............

Eve Roper March 26, 2021 at 12:49 PM Beautiful verse, Andrea, and the photo outstanding. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus March 26, 2021 at 12:15 PM There was never any doubt that this gem would place high, Andrea! Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Sam Kauffman March 26, 2021 at 11:13 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea. Such a lovely "marmalade" rainbow of colors and images. All the best!

Marilene Evans March 26, 2021 at 11:04 AM Such a beautiful poem..... reminds me of a song with "marmalade sky".... Lucy and the sky with diamonds.... Congrats, Andrea.

Alexis Y. March 26, 2021 at 9:47 AM Hi Andrea, It's no surprise that you got the top spot! Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Regina Mcintosh March 26, 2021 at 6:14 AM So beautiful - Congrats on your top win. God bless you too. Love, Gina

Joseph May March 26, 2021 at 5:54 AM Beautiful write with lovely "marmalades", Congrats on your win Andrea..

Alexis Y. March 23, 2021 at 5:27 PM WoW!Andrea, You described the beautiful photo to a T. You have just penned yourself into the winner's circle. I enjoyed the view:-) Alexis

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 22, 2021 at 4:48 PM Twilight is my favourite time and sight of the day - beautiful tableau!

Quoth Theraven March 22, 2021 at 4:44 PM Andrea, If last light seen before sight abandoned me, would wish such a twilight sunset as this. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger March 22, 2021 at 1:55 AM Ah so delicate and gorgeous - the photo and the poem Andrea.

Mystic Rose Rose March 21, 2021 at 1:46 PM I love your painting, both word and photo :) have a great Sunday Andrea

Sotto Poet March 21, 2021 at 11:06 AM Your writing is stunning, Andrea, in a very fantastic portrait. With such artistic clarity, so brilliantly written like in the photo. I came to find myself looking at it! Take care of yourself, and Best of luck in the contest

Anitha Jayasankar March 21, 2021 at 9:56 AM What beautiful imagery... 'blue green laps sand welcoming twilight'.... Loved it Andrea. Best wishes in the contest.. ~ Ani

Judy Ball March 21, 2021 at 2:47 AM This is exceptional Andrea and the pic is perfect. Love it. God Bless, JB

Paul Callus March 21, 2021 at 2:25 AM Beautiful imagery, Andrea! Your poem and accompanying picture compliment each other perfectly. ~ Wishing you a lovely & inspiring spring! // paul

Unseeking Seeker March 20, 2021 at 11:32 PM Amazing portrayal of a beautiful rainbow vivified sunset ... in so few words! Better correct the year to 2021, unless you enjoy time travel! Anitha Jayasankar March 21, 2021 at 9:54 AM Haha Andrea Dietrich March 21, 2021 at 8:49 AM oh dang, you caught out my secret. I'm from 3021. We don't have beaches any more in the future, so I prefer to live in this century where I can still find pictures like these. hahaha

Kim Rodrigues March 20, 2021 at 2:01 PM Marmalade spreads over yellow sun - pretty imagery!

David Kavanagh March 20, 2021 at 12:50 PM Heya Andrea, looking at your breathtaking picture, it’s very difficult to do it justice, but you certainly pulled it off, fantastic, best of luck in the contest, cheers David

Carolyn Devonshire March 20, 2021 at 10:31 AM A very creative description of sunset, rich in color and imagery. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

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