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A Sunset Closure

blind by the dazzle,
into the sunset,I gaze-
on my yesterdays

introspectionnaturehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

December 6, 2012 at 7:17 PM

Brian, i can see action on the first line......pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 8, 2011 at 6:43 PM

Congrats Brian on an exciting win for this brilliant beauty of Haiku poetry luv.. amazing lines as always luv..

Janette Fisher

November 8, 2011 at 11:47 AM

Brian, many congrats on your wonderful Haiku's win in PD'S contest, perfection as always - regards Janette

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 8, 2011 at 6:01 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol

David Williams

November 8, 2011 at 1:48 AM

Brian congrats on your win..David

Andrea Dietrich

November 7, 2011 at 10:44 PM

congratulations, BRian, this is a very thoughtful one. Thanks also for my win in your most recently judged contest.

Poet Destroyer A

November 7, 2011 at 10:02 PM

BRIAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.