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A sunset closure

blind by the dazzle, into the sunset,I gaze- on my yesterdays

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/6/2012 7:17:00 PM
Brian, i can see action on the first line......pd
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:43:00 PM
Congrats Brian on an exciting win for this brilliant beauty of Haiku poetry luv.. amazing lines as always luv..
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Date: 11/8/2011 11:47:00 AM
Brian, many congrats on your wonderful Haiku's win in PD'S contest, perfection as always - regards Janette
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Date: 11/8/2011 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Sunset Haiku" contest Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/8/2011 1:48:00 AM
Brian congrats on your win..David
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:44:00 PM
congratulations, BRian, this is a very thoughtful one. Thanks also for my win in your most recently judged contest.
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Date: 11/7/2011 10:02:00 PM
BRIAN~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my SUNSET contest* this contest was awesome* I had to try a few HAIKUS of my own. Have a wonderful week, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/6/2011 4:07:00 AM
Wonderful haiku! I found enjoyment in reading your poem. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 11/5/2011 1:20:00 PM
great write brian thanks for sharing gl in contest dear friend rnjoyed meaning behind write
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:36:00 AM
Brian, very lovely... Thank you for supporting my contest..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2011 7:46:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and a wonderful read! Thank you for sharing your talent!
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