A Summer Vale

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A Summer Vale Hints hailed she raised her ocher veils, Expose those enlightened from shade, Spun tales of yesterdays reveals, Golden treasures anoint the blessed, The abandon of buttered skins, Urbane exodus blooms on roads, As summer vale blows saffron breaths. 2019 September 05 *3rd Place* FAREWELL, SUMMER ~~nette onclaud

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/13/2019 7:50:00 PM

A warm congrats William on you podium win.

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/13/2019 7:51:00 PM

Feeling the warmth my way ~ Aloha always, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2019 5:06:00 PM

wow, i love the saffron breaths at the end. Other imagery was also very nice . Congrats for the win

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 5:16:00 PM

Needn't respond to any---

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 5:15:00 PM

Your duly visits are justifiably honor-bound and gracious--If you're up to a read of subtle hints--don't know if read--my recent faves are The Testament, A Winter Debut, O' True North, Cascade, & Too High A Price ~ Aloha always William

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/12/2019 4:24:00 PM

this is one of my faves on the winners list - congrats!

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 5:18:00 PM

No response is necessary---

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 4:54:00 PM

AWESOME My recent fave is The Testament (Hope it's OK)--yours were the only one read as I suffer from severe vertigo been on the top and all (chuckles) every word I wrote you -- heartfelt (laughing gas talking) ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/12/2019 12:44:00 PM

- Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 12:50:00 PM

Ah! Precious! ~ Aloha always William

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/12/2019 11:59:00 AM

subtly designed with ' the abandon of buttered skins,' william... congrats on this ' feeling' poem and thanks for participating in my challenge...huggs

Hilo Poet
Date: 9/12/2019 12:21:00 PM

Luv's always ~ Aloha William