William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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A Summer Vale

A Summer Vale

     Hints hailed she raised her ocher veils,
          Expose those enlightened from shade,
               Spun tales of yesterdays reveals,
                    Golden treasures anoint the blessed,
               The abandon of buttered skins,
          Urbane exodus blooms on roads,
     As summer vale blows saffron breaths.

2019 September 05

*3rd Place*

FAREWELL, SUMMER
~~nette onclaud

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Jeanne Mcgee September 13, 2019 at 7:50 PM A warm congrats William on you podium win. William Kelii Kekaula September 13, 2019 at 7:51 PM Feeling the warmth my way ~ Aloha always, William

Andrea Dietrich September 12, 2019 at 5:06 PM wow, i love the saffron breaths at the end. Other imagery was also very nice . Congrats for the win William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 5:16 PM Needn't respond to any--- William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 5:15 PM Your duly visits are justifiably honor-bound and gracious--If you're up to a read of subtle hints--don't know if read--my recent faves are The Testament, A Winter Debut, O' True North, Cascade, & Too High A Price ~ Aloha always William

Charlotte Puddifoot September 12, 2019 at 4:24 PM this is one of my faves on the winners list - congrats! William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 5:18 PM No response is necessary--- William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 4:54 PM AWESOME My recent fave is The Testament (Hope it's OK)--yours were the only one read as I suffer from severe vertigo been on the top and all (chuckles) every word I wrote you -- heartfelt (laughing gas talking) ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2019 at 12:44 PM - Goodbye Summer .... and congratulations on your winning poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 12:50 PM Ah! Precious! ~ Aloha always William

Lonna Blodgett September 12, 2019 at 9:28 AM Love the final line “blows saffron breaths”. Congrats Lonna William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 10:06 AM Totally sweet--enjoyed ~ Aloha always William

Brenda Chiri September 12, 2019 at 5:36 AM Congrats on a well deserved win!;) William Kelii Kekaula September 12, 2019 at 5:48 AM I see better through your kindness, ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger September 6, 2019 at 4:10 AM "The abandon of buttered skins," - yes, this is what it is! William Kelii Kekaula September 6, 2019 at 4:30 AM Dutiful Coppertone lotions and not whats ~ Aloha always William