John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

A Summer Sunset

The blazing sunset demonstrates
charisma of this summer day;
a revelation to display
the pulchritude that now awaits.
And I adore this paragon 
of nature’s beauty captivate;
as sun sinks in the bay at eight
there’s no discomfort to dwell on.


July 8, 2018

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Susan Gentry July 31, 2018 at 9:25 PM Back to congratulate you for your win. Well done. :) John Gondolf July 31, 2018 at 10:23 PM Thank you, Susan, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole July 13, 2018 at 9:14 PM I love both, the sunrise and the sunset. Nature holds many inspiring moments. Your thoughts are beautiful. ~ Brandy John Gondolf July 13, 2018 at 9:34 PM Thank you, Brandy, i’ve been inspired by the beauty of nature all my life, only recently I’ve started sharing my thoughts. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poetry. John

Susan Gentry July 13, 2018 at 9:39 AM You did this beautifully!! Best of luck in contest. No doubt a winner. :) John Gondolf July 13, 2018 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much, Susan, I appreciate your encouragement. John

Faraz Ajmal July 10, 2018 at 4:44 AM It is a really wonderful poem, good luck in the contest John Gondolf July 11, 2018 at 6:13 AM Thanks, Faraz.

Alexis Y. July 8, 2018 at 5:01 PM Hi John, I agree with Andrea, you used the chosen well and you nailed it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis John Gondolf July 8, 2018 at 7:12 PM Thank you, Alexis, I appreciate your support. John

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2018 at 4:48 PM gosh, I am not sure of the rules yet, but if the idea is to fit everything into just 8 lines, wow, you nailed it, John!!! John Gondolf July 8, 2018 at 5:00 PM Thanks, Andrea, I appreciate it. John

Eve Roper July 8, 2018 at 11:28 AM Wow!!!! John you had no problem using the 8 word.. nicely done and good luck in the contest Hugs eve John Gondolf July 8, 2018 at 12:08 PM Thank you so much, Eve, I appreciate it. John