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A Summer Fruit On a Winter Night

on a winter night I tasted a summer fruit under the blanket pulpy and juicy soft like a peeled red lychee her luscious wet lips lost in her softness I explored new horizons beyond this blue sky **click on "About this poem" =================== Placement:10th;(Nov.2011) Contest:A kiss like fruit Sponsor:Michael.J.Falotico By:kashinath karmakar

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 6:21:00 AM

A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2011 5:08:00 AM

Congrats Kash on a wonderful super win with this fruity delicious poetry on luv ..luv...

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/5/2011 2:57:00 PM

congrats on your win, a tasty sensual delight, love the title!

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/5/2011 10:01:00 AM

Very sweet... The title got me in the first place.. The poem inside it beautifully written. Congrats, Kash :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/4/2011 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations to you, you little lychee taster you. (do you like my joke?) I'm glad you are in the winners circle where you deserve to be!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/4/2011 3:24:00 PM

kash, the official romance poet of poetry soup, congrats on this hot steamy dreamy write for mrs. kash....she probably has to keep u in a cage! ha hah. j.k. Just wanted to say thank you for all your encouragement with my writing...you pick up on all my dumb mistakes and keep my pen moving in the "write" direction. You are a bengali gem, friend! All the best to you, Kash. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/4/2011 3:04:00 PM

Congrats K.K !!and thanks so much for supporting my contest...... always Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2011 12:51:00 PM

Loved this clever poem full of innuendo, Kash : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2011 7:53:00 AM

sounds so yummy sweet and tasty Kash.. perfect fruit for the contest my friend.. good luck with those lips luv..

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 10/28/2011 10:24:00 AM

So evocative, the images tease the mind dear poet!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/27/2011 5:18:00 PM

Interesting fruit..Great descriptive write about it..If for the contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you taking the time to comment..Sara

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/27/2011 1:26:00 PM

Kash, more more can I say?? that hasn't been said.. Awesome suggestive write, made me smile :) Wilma

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2011 1:26:00 PM

great petic flavor, dear kashi... now i want it!!.. best wishes if for a poem..come over! :) huggs

Farrah Veronica Sinha

Date: 10/27/2011 12:15:00 PM

Very very suggestive poem Kashinath....got a bit confused in the first four lines....but lovely....

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/27/2011 11:18:00 AM

This is excellent and fruity. My Filipino friends make s special desert out of this fruit, and it is yummy. ..the picture you chose was perfect also. Romantic piece, Kash. :) Gwendolen.....Everything is all caps on my ABC form..and somewhat of a sentence/paragraph. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2011 12:31:00 AM

WEll, Kash, just let me say, this is a very sexy poem!! I think Michael should be well pleased!