Kash Poet Poet Senryu

A Summer Fruit On a Winter Night

on a winter night
I tasted a summer fruit
under the blanket

pulpy and juicy
soft like a peeled red lychee
her luscious wet lips

lost in her softness
I explored new horizons
beyond this blue sky




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Placement:10th;(Nov.2011)

Contest:A kiss like fruit

Sponsor:Michael.J.Falotico

By:kashinath karmakar

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 7, 2011 at 6:21 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 6, 2011 at 5:08 AM Congrats Kash on a wonderful super win with this fruity delicious poetry on luv ..luv...

Charlotte Puddifoot November 5, 2011 at 2:57 PM congrats on your win, a tasty sensual delight, love the title!

Dinda Minardi November 5, 2011 at 10:01 AM Very sweet... The title got me in the first place.. The poem inside it beautifully written. Congrats, Kash :)

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2011 at 8:31 PM Congratulations to you, you little lychee taster you. (do you like my joke?) I'm glad you are in the winners circle where you deserve to be!

Gwendolen Song November 4, 2011 at 3:24 PM kash, the official romance poet of poetry soup, congrats on this hot steamy dreamy write for mrs. kash....she probably has to keep u in a cage! ha hah. j.k. Just wanted to say thank you for all your encouragement with my writing...you pick up on all my dumb mistakes and keep my pen moving in the "write" direction. You are a bengali gem, friend! All the best to you, Kash. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen

Michael J. Falotico November 4, 2011 at 3:04 PM Congrats K.K !!and thanks so much for supporting my contest...... always Michael

Jack Horne October 29, 2011 at 12:51 PM Loved this clever poem full of innuendo, Kash : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 29, 2011 at 7:53 AM sounds so yummy sweet and tasty Kash.. perfect fruit for the contest my friend.. good luck with those lips luv..

Elizabeth Wesley October 28, 2011 at 10:24 AM So evocative, the images tease the mind dear poet!

Sara Kendrick October 27, 2011 at 5:18 PM Interesting fruit..Great descriptive write about it..If for the contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you taking the time to comment..Sara

Nette Onclaud October 27, 2011 at 1:26 PM great petic flavor, dear kashi... now i want it!!.. best wishes if for a poem..come over! :) huggs

Wilma Neels October 27, 2011 at 1:26 PM Kash, more more can I say?? that hasn't been said.. Awesome suggestive write, made me smile :) Wilma

Farrah Veronica Sinha October 27, 2011 at 12:15 PM Very very suggestive poem Kashinath....got a bit confused in the first four lines....but lovely....

Gwendolen Song October 27, 2011 at 11:18 AM This is excellent and fruity. My Filipino friends make s special desert out of this fruit, and it is yummy. ..the picture you chose was perfect also. Romantic piece, Kash. :) Gwendolen.....Everything is all caps on my ABC form..and somewhat of a sentence/paragraph. Gwendolen

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2011 at 12:31 AM WEll, Kash, just let me say, this is a very sexy poem!! I think Michael should be well pleased!