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A Summer Fruit On a Winter Night

on a winter night
I tasted a summer fruit
under the blanket

pulpy and juicy
soft like a peeled red lychee
her luscious wet lips

lost in her softness
I explored new horizons
beyond this blue sky




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Placement:10th;(Nov.2011)

Contest:A kiss like fruit

Sponsor:Michael.J.Falotico

By:kashinath karmakar

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/7/2011 6:21:00 AM A belated congratulations I am sending you for your win in Michael's "A Kiss Like Fruit" contest Kash. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/6/2011 5:08:00 AM Congrats Kash on a wonderful super win with this fruity delicious poetry on luv ..luv... Login to Reply

Charlotte Puddifoot Date: 11/5/2011 2:57:00 PM congrats on your win, a tasty sensual delight, love the title! Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 11/5/2011 10:01:00 AM Very sweet... The title got me in the first place.. The poem inside it beautifully written. Congrats, Kash :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/4/2011 8:31:00 PM Congratulations to you, you little lychee taster you. (do you like my joke?) I'm glad you are in the winners circle where you deserve to be! Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/4/2011 3:24:00 PM kash, the official romance poet of poetry soup, congrats on this hot steamy dreamy write for mrs. kash....she probably has to keep u in a cage! ha hah. j.k. Just wanted to say thank you for all your encouragement with my writing...you pick up on all my dumb mistakes and keep my pen moving in the "write" direction. You are a bengali gem, friend! All the best to you, Kash. Congrats on this win. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 11/4/2011 3:04:00 PM Congrats K.K !!and thanks so much for supporting my contest...... always Michael Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/29/2011 12:51:00 PM Loved this clever poem full of innuendo, Kash : ) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/29/2011 7:53:00 AM sounds so yummy sweet and tasty Kash.. perfect fruit for the contest my friend.. good luck with those lips luv.. Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 10/28/2011 10:24:00 AM So evocative, the images tease the mind dear poet! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/27/2011 5:18:00 PM Interesting fruit..Great descriptive write about it..If for the contest, reads like a winner..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I appreciate you taking the time to comment..Sara Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 10/27/2011 1:26:00 PM Kash, more more can I say?? that hasn't been said.. Awesome suggestive write, made me smile :) Wilma Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/27/2011 1:26:00 PM great petic flavor, dear kashi... now i want it!!.. best wishes if for a poem..come over! :) huggs Login to Reply

Farrah Veronica Sinha Date: 10/27/2011 12:15:00 PM Very very suggestive poem Kashinath....got a bit confused in the first four lines....but lovely.... Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 10/27/2011 11:18:00 AM This is excellent and fruity. My Filipino friends make s special desert out of this fruit, and it is yummy. ..the picture you chose was perfect also. Romantic piece, Kash. :) Gwendolen.....Everything is all caps on my ABC form..and somewhat of a sentence/paragraph. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/27/2011 12:31:00 AM WEll, Kash, just let me say, this is a very sexy poem!! I think Michael should be well pleased! Login to Reply