"a Summer Day"

Back when I was twenty I was on a trip...
A bunch of guys and plenty to sip...
I thought I had all the lines in the book...
Till this beautiful girl passed by me and that's
all it took....
We walked and talked for hours on this South
Carolina beach...
Everything was like a slow movie and her words had a reach...
We cuddled for an eternity it seemed as the sun stole 
our day, the sky was our blanket as the sand is where we lay...
Told her my deepest desires of one day being in a band, 
she gazed in my eyes and I fell in her hands...
Read her my first poem back then and she smiled and blushed
as we made love to the sounds of the waves...
I new she was leaving that morning, but I always look back to 
that wonderful day....

"SweetHearts" Summer love contest...
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Galua Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 1:00 AM
mmmm....just love to close my eyes while reading this one...love the pleasure...it's soooo sweet...thank you...^_^ v
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:30 PM
Congrats on the sixth place win, Michael
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:19 AM
Congratulations Michael on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 7:44 PM
this was one of my favorites of the bunch. I am glad to see it made top ten. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congrats Michael on your success in my contest.. with this wonderful and unique write.. thankxxx for supporting my contests always.. my new one will be posted today.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 17, 2010 at 11:14 PM
Hey is this a true story. It is so romantic! Good luck in the contest. Maybe it is judged already? I think I saw a blog about it. gosh, I am just trying to get thru comments, no blogs for me today. haha. Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 3:46 PM
Dreamy serene tranquil scene of a moment in your time Michael, beautiful words you write >> James
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2010 at 3:43 PM
So romantic..Good luck in the contest ..Sara
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