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A Summer Couplet

Sunlight bursts with softness in the summer
Rays shine, basting all with something warmer

Contest: LOVIN' SUMMER: A Summer Couplet
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

6/11/2013

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Poet Destroyer A

July 7, 2013 at 10:57 AM

loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

Bukang Liwayway

June 30, 2013 at 10:05 AM

Congratulations on your win friend Russell..It's a great write..cheers!! :) Have a good day always! :) Hugs, maria

Audrey Haick

June 30, 2013 at 12:56 AM

So true! Congratulations on a fine win, Russell!

Skat A

June 29, 2013 at 3:21 PM

Russell, yes warm and warmer..... Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

Kash Poet

June 29, 2013 at 1:28 PM

Congrats Russell on your win in the contest.Lovely couplet.

Carrie Richards

June 29, 2013 at 1:20 PM

Love the use of "basting" in your poem.......what a great metaphor that is!! Congratulations, Russell!

Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2013 at 8:52 AM

way to go, Russell!! I thought this was so nice. Love that first line. Congrats to you.

Richard Lamoureux

June 29, 2013 at 7:36 AM

Congratulations Russell, a fine entry.

John Posey

June 13, 2013 at 7:31 PM

Russell, this is exactly what a winning entry looks like... Jake

Kash Poet

June 13, 2013 at 7:45 AM

Love this Russell!Very nice couplet.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

June 13, 2013 at 1:08 AM

lovely Russell , you captured summer, we are still waiting in England xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 12, 2013 at 12:40 PM

- Uplifting summer words, Russell ..... HERE: rain all week!! - Good luck in the contest! - Hope your summer will win! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux

June 12, 2013 at 6:51 AM

Very nice Russell, I also enjoyed your comment on Becca's poem. That was a poem within itself. I think you should turn it into an actual poem it holds so much poetic potential for expansion. Either way I enjoyed your words.