A Summer Cold

I've got a cold,
I`ve got sniffles and sneezes.
I`ve got chills and fever,
Because of the breezes,

That whistle around,
The eaves of my house,
Causing all to take cover,
Be it kin, cat or mouse.

I`ve vbeen dipped in the pond,
Called Misery.
Been sittin`here thinkinn`,
Pore pitiful me.

Can`t humm a tune,
To chase `way my blues,
Cause I lost my voice,
And my ears are plugged too.

The season of rains,
Is on us again,
And though we have need of them,
They bring with them,

The colds and the flu,
Of the ending of Summer,
And I don`t have to tell you,
It`s really a bummer.

                               Judy Ball

My head hurts, I`m dizzy,
I ache,
This ain`t no cold,
I got the flu.
             
   (sigh)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 12:40 AM
Hey, is this why you haven't been around?? Miss ya, Judy! Cute poem.
Ball Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Thanks so much for writing back Andrea. Yeah it's been quite a bad one. Still talking like "Whispering Smith." lol Going on three weeks now. Got sent home from work because I was so sick. Been spending lots of time in bed on a cold medicine high. Seem to be coming back slowly now. Hope I'm on the mend. God Bless, JB
Kriticos Avatar
September 25, 2011 at 1:21 AM
Good work Judy....tis the season lol.
Ball Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Thanks Kyle. I've been really sick with this but think I may be coming back slowly. Still got a deep sexy voice as my daughter calls it. It's a hoarse whisper. Been three weeks now. I'm really tired of being so sick. God Bless, JB
Horne Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 3:27 PM
I hope you're feeling better now, Judy - maybe you wrote the beastly thing out of your system : )
Ball Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:57 AM
Hi Jack, Thanks for writing back. It's been three weeks now and I still have a "deep sexy voice" as my daughter calls it. It's a hoarse whisper. I still get tired really fast and spend a lot of time in bed taking cold medicine. (YUCH) Still sneezing, coughing and blowing my nose. this has been a "Ninja Cold". My daughters coined that phrase. I you say something is a Ninja Whatever that means it's a killer. God Bless, JB
Babcock Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 4:37 PM
HUGS i hope you are better. You describe the flu so well in this poem. Have not had a lot of time on the computer lately so just wanted to check in and say hello. Cold and rainy here too in Regina. Did get my garden off and made my borscht and froze 14 containers. Get well soon. love phyl
Ball Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 11:59 AM
Hi Phillis, Thanks for writing. Been sick for three weeks now though the weather hasn't been too bad. Pretty sunny actually. Still talk in a hoarse whisper. Still sneezing, coughing and blowing my nose. Spend lots of time in bed because I get really tired real fast. God Bless, JB
Merryman Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 11:48 AM
Enjoyed your poem, but sorry you're ill. Hope you feel better soon. Kim
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Thanks so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Sivey Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 11:13 AM
Oh I do hate the flu...colds too! You have a wonderful poem describing the terrors of the flu season! I hope you are better!! Great work!!
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Thanks so much Russ. God Bles, JB
Davis Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 10:54 AM
really amazing... really...
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:05 PM
Thanks so much prentiss. God Bless, JB
J Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 10:31 AM
I hope you get better.
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:08 PM
Thanks so much earnie. God Bless, JB
Lane Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 10:31 AM
My wife has had it for three weeks and now my throat is scratchy. I had to read it. Get well soon. Tony
Ball Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 1:13 PM
Thanks so much Tony. I hope you both get well soon. God \Bless, JB
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace