A Sugar Coated Thought

You have me trapped in your sweet web of desire
Wanting you so bad my heart races and my skin transpires.
Thinking of you with a lust that pulls me closer as I dream
Into all of your warmness, that embraces a comfort, like cookies and cream.
A sugar coated thought of what I need and want from you
Devouring all of your goodies, irresistibly mouthwatering, that’s true!
You attract me like a bee to honey, a smell so fragrant to the core
Enticing and luring to your web, like a seduction into a candy store.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/12/2013 5:48:00 PM
Great use of metaphors Holly to describe your inner desires. Nicely done, Blessings Carl
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