Larry Bradfield Poet Haiku

A Stubborn Man - Cq

He made a bet
That he could live
Beneath the sea
A stubborn man

He took a breath
Then held his nose
Water was deep
He died that way

8-31-19
Contest : Charlie - Quadku
Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2019 at 6:01 PM I found this one humorous. Only a fool would do such a thing. Enjoyed this. Congrats for the win

Constance La France September 18, 2019 at 11:38 AM Larry, congratulations on your win, excellent *** Larry Bradfield September 18, 2019 at 1:39 PM Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2019 at 11:04 AM - Congratulations on your great Haiku, Larry :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :) Larry Bradfield September 18, 2019 at 1:39 PM Thank you

Charles Messina September 18, 2019 at 7:01 AM I love this Larry. I really like the ending too! I got a chuckle reading this. Congratulations on your win. All the best.. Charlie Larry Bradfield September 18, 2019 at 1:40 PM Thanks Charlie and for the placement!