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A String of Haiku

DREAMS DEFERRED dandelion dreams dancing doting dogwood tree deforestation THE QUIET ONES dark heart’s art tar scars black blood beating beckoning sociopath scream BUTTERFLY BRUNCH black blue butterfly breathless beauty blessed beware bird beak bite bloody

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Date: 10/12/2024 12:13:00 PM
Hi Karen you're strung three wonderful Haikus together. Xx
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/12/2024 2:47:00 PM
Thanks John!
Date: 10/9/2024 8:21:00 AM
Dear Karen, What great alliterations to excellent Haikus. These filled my days today, and I am thankful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thanks Daniel
Date: 10/9/2024 2:23:00 AM
A clever string of haikus Karen, all sad, and all connected with each other. A great write Hugs Maria
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/9/2024 5:00:00 AM
These are from my poem cemetery but glad u like
Date: 10/8/2024 6:11:00 PM
Very nice enjoyed read!
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2024 10:43:00 PM
Thanks so much!
Date: 10/8/2024 11:25:00 AM
Each haiku draws me into its sphere. Each one has an entirely different theme, yet they complement each other. A beautiful read.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2024 12:29:00 PM
Aw you are so kind dear Hilda! Thank you.
Date: 10/8/2024 3:41:00 AM
I enjoy the alliteration in your haiku poems. It gives that extra punch.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/8/2024 4:08:00 AM
Thanks and I love your name Kahlani!

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