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a Streak of Red

Silvan black Come the grackles Shimmering blue streaks Darting toward the sound Of bird song glee Bullies In Zorro garb Storm the bird feeder Black darts Flung at swaying targets Challenging The squirrels reign. Sparrows Root for the stalking cat To strike Leap high A streak of red Upon the sylvan black

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Date: 2/23/2024 4:07:00 AM
I like your battle of the bird feeder! I had to look up the grackle - what an interesting name for a bird, now I want to know where the word came from...(from Latin graculus. Another form as 'gracula' which sounds like your bully birds.) Love the Zoro garb, and the crescendo toward the strike. J :)
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Date: 2/22/2024 7:26:00 PM
Better than modern art... I can just visualize the whole scene. Bravo, gw
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