A Stranger In the Mirror

These days, I look into a mirror
and ask myself who that person is- 
that diminished creature-
gazing back in puzzlement.

A smile garners
a goofy grin in return.
I don't know that old woman,
how'd she get in there?

There's no simple formula
for what life slings at us 
in terms of happiness or sorrow,
no such thing as a standard share.

Until my mother died, the sum 
of my life's sorrows could press
into grandmother's tiny thimble.
Why all these unearned lines?

Is there some unwritten rule,
that every milestone gets carved
into your face, like the etchings 
in granite, after you're planted?

Zap! Another line here.
Zip! Another sag there.
And that woman in the mirror,
she's nothing but a bundle of lies..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Bauer Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 3:42 PM
oh, i can so relate to this one! i try to avoid mirrors as much as possible lately...
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Me, too. Sometimes the vision is actually a shock to my system.
Meade Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:03 AM
I resemble your poem!! Well said . . .
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 8:55 AM
Eventually, everyone reaches that point, David. I don't remember being aware of that when I was young. Who was it that said, "Youth is wasted on the young."
Thajudeen Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Your poem mirroring a high truth.I enjoyed reading.Thanks for sharing.Regards dear poet Adams.
Adams Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Thank you, Safa. In spite of all the negative aspects of aging, there are many benefits. Retirement gives ample time to pursue personal interests. Bill and I have joined local writers' groups, and poetry societies.
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