A Stranger: His Hero

In a small, dusty town in Afghanistan,
there lived a good and faithful man.

To a two thousand year old belief he was true.
Protect guests in your home at all costs, it said do.

He found one of our soldiers, wounded and almost dead;
took him to his home; the hungry soldier he fed.

The Taliban found him and were about to take his life.
They placed his head on a log, and raised a great knife.

The man fired a shot in the air as a warning;
this soldier is my guest, I can't let you harm him.

Knowing they would be back to destroy him and his town;
such courage in this world is scarcely found.

This wasn't family, simply a stranger in need.
I pray God will bless him for his heroic deed.

The enemy returned, but the man didn't despair.
He fought for the stranger, till help from the air.

The soldier, found again and was fighting for his life.
The man's son gave him a weapon; his life spared by the knife.

The soldier was rescued but never forgot his new friend.
It was with love for each other and laughter, when they met again.



Inspired by the true story: Lone Survivor 



Contest: Unsung Hero
Sponsor: Carol Eastman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 8:11 PM
Fantastic write my friend.. I am back again to offer congrats on your win with this fine poem. My prediction came true.. Bravo!!!!
Clark Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Congrats, Arlene!!! I knew when first you arrived here on Poetry Soup and I read your offerings you had "the gift" ... and I told you so. Your winning with this entry proves I was right. Excellent work, Arlene! Jack C
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August 6, 2014 at 9:44 PM
Arlene, Congratulations, In Carol's Unsung Hero Contest. LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:09 AM
wow, as I read this, I could recognize the story. But I forgot the name of the movie till I saw what you said at the end. That was a great story, wasn't it? What a cool way to do the contest. Nothing came to me at all . Congrats. I see you won!
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 2:02 AM
Thanks, hun! Yes, it was awesome... I couldn't remember the name of the man from the village... God bless him, tho... Hugs.. Arlene
Gorelick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:33 PM
I want to see this movie..its on my list. Congrats to you for this nice poem. BG
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:45 PM
It is awesome, Barbara!.. I have heard the book is better.. It tells the soldiers thoughts through it all.. Thanks, my dear friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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August 1, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Excellent piece here. I really enjoyed reading this most moving and inspirational verse. I will be back to read again! Always, Laura
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:25 PM
Thank you so much, dear Laura.. So sweet of you to visit.. I must read from your list.. Hugs.. Arlene
Nehls Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:51 AM
This is very well done, Arlene. I saw that movie the other day and was touched by that man also. This is a strong message to send to all and you did so well writing into your wonderful poem. I totally enjoyed this one, my friend.... Robert.
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:23 PM
Thank you, dear Robert!.. I wish blessings be poured on this man and his family!.. Hugs, my friend.. Arlene
Nance Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 7:16 AM
aww wow. What a powerful story!! great job on this winning piece it gave me goosebumps!!
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 12:21 PM
Thank you so much, sweet Casarah!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Mehta Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Well crafted piece, congrats. Arlene
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:48 AM
Thanks, Dr. Mehta!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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July 31, 2014 at 3:29 PM
I am very picky about the movies I go to these days but I saw this TWICE! What a great story it was and you have described it so well here Arlene...BIG congrats! - Tim
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 8:02 PM
It was an awesome movie!.. Thank you so much, Tim, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:27 AM
A great story - What if everyone could share this love .... maybe there would be peace on earth. - A pleasure to read, Arlene - Good luck in the contest, hope you win! - Thanks for the nice visit at my poems, always welcome :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Oh! Wouldn't than be so wonderful, Anne Lise!!.. <3 .. Thank you so much for the comments and well wishes, hun.. Big hugs to you!.. Arlene
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July 31, 2014 at 2:28 AM
What the world would be if we all considered ourselves guest in the house of the Earth, honored by each other Arlene. Afghanistan is so very beautiful. Few terrains better for warfare. Fine moral poetry. J.A.B.
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:13 AM
Oh, Justin! Love the idea of your first comment!!.. If only..... Thank you so much my dear friend... Hugs.. Arlene
Lindley Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 10:56 PM
A truly wonderful write!!! A great joy to read my friend. I believe it will do very well in the contest! BBravoo!!!!
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Thank you so much dear Robert.. Hugs.. Arlene
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July 30, 2014 at 1:53 PM
How can I not remember my dead friends of persons ... These are the words of a song about Afghanistan. M.K.
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:43 AM
What a remarkable story and poem Arlene....captivating.... Hugs Tim
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 10:35 AM
Thanks, Tim, my friend!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:42 AM
What an incredible story i loved the write from beginning to end. Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Thank you so much, Jan, my dear friend.. I am always encouraged by your comments.. Hugs.. Arlene
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