A stranger from afar

his stare sending chills up my spine



AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentile Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 11:10 AM
Very lucky you are to experience that Line!!!! Great one xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 9:27 PM
Well, sometimes the chills are good and sometimes they're not.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 2:43 AM
Uh-oh. And this is the week my friend has a stalker. Are you reading my mind?
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:22 AM
Creepy.
Man Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:42 AM
I kind of got a chill just reading this.. words are powerful, Line!
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, LM.
Warrior Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:37 AM
Is that the only place lol...loved it Line...love & light...^WW^
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Some people have creep written all over them.
Mcguire Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:18 AM
Love it! So much! her stare sending thrills into my mind
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:24 AM
I like your version much better, Timothy. LOL
Blown Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 12:14 AM
nice writing of suspense...the ant- agonist is a cat, right
Gauthier Avatar
August 21, 2018 at 8:24 AM
Of course, Sand.
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