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A Strand of Love

A strand of love lays wilted on my sill. It was once two and now only one. I bend it so it’s a couple, but it cracks. Just a wisp of love that’s vanished in the wind.

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Jerry Bolton

Date: 5/22/2016 8:54:00 AM

Eh . . . I am going through that emotional state now, Raj.The only thing is I am the oe who broke it off. Still . . . I have heartche.

Raj Napal
Date: 5/22/2016 7:05:00 PM

I'm sorry for your sorrow and hope this poem helps.

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/22/2016 8:05:00 AM

Softly sad. Congratulations Raj, on being featured...

Raj Napal
Date: 5/22/2016 7:04:00 PM

Thanks, my friend. It is sad.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/16/2016 2:37:00 AM

A memory can be fashioned into a heart with no trouble at all Raj. I enjoyed this whisper of love's longing. ; )

Raj Napal
Date: 3/16/2016 5:55:00 PM

Thanks so much. It is a very faint whisper.

Timothy Barry

Date: 3/15/2016 10:56:00 PM

Delicate.

Raj Napal
Date: 3/16/2016 5:54:00 PM

Thanks a lot. It felt pretty delicate when I wrote it.