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A Strand of Love

A strand of love lays wilted on my sill.

It was once two and now only one.

I bend it so it’s a couple, but it cracks.

Just a wisp of love that’s vanished in the wind.

Copyright © Raj Napal | Year Posted 2016

depressionfeelingsgoodbyeheartbreakheartbrokenfree verse

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May 22, 2016 at 8:54 AM

Eh . . . I am going through that emotional state now, Raj.The only thing is I am the oe who broke it off. Still . . . I have heartche.

May 22, 2016 at 7:05 PM

I'm sorry for your sorrow and hope this poem helps.

May 22, 2016 at 8:05 AM

Softly sad. Congratulations Raj, on being featured...

May 22, 2016 at 7:04 PM

Thanks, my friend. It is sad.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 16, 2016 at 2:37 AM

A memory can be fashioned into a heart with no trouble at all Raj. I enjoyed this whisper of love's longing. ; )

March 16, 2016 at 5:55 PM

Thanks so much. It is a very faint whisper.

March 15, 2016 at 10:56 PM

Delicate.

March 16, 2016 at 5:54 PM

Thanks a lot. It felt pretty delicate when I wrote it.

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