A Story of Survival

He asked me if I'd like a drink
I told him that I would
He lived in a one room cabin
Back yonder in the wood

He poured three fingers in a cup
Then poured himself one, too.
Smiled an' said he made his livin'
Peddlin' this pure home brew.

I'd stumbled on this man named Jeb
While roundin' up some strays
He dang near shot my head clean off
'Fore I could have my says

Once he saw I was a cowboy
He got downright friendly
He had a dog and a rooster -
A hoss kinda spindly

He had a pair of deep blue eyes
And auburn hair that shone
He told me his whole story then
And why he lived alone

He'd been here pushin' forty years
A sheriff on his tail
Said he ain't broke no law he knew -
But he'd put him in jail

He'd got close to the sheriff's wife
When she was all alone
She gave birth to a blue eyed boy
With auburn hair that shone

The brown eyed sheriff wasn't pleased
An' oiled his forty five
So Jeb ran here and built a still
To try and stay alive

So here he lives and here he'll stay
'Mongst the trees and the vines
A prisoner of them deep blue eyes
And auburn hair that shines


April, 2016
Contest: Your Choice (7)
Sponsor: Brian Strand
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Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 9:16 AM
- Larry, a great choice of your poems, congratulations - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 8:50 AM
Thank you! I lived on a large ranch in West Texas growing up and everybody read Zane Grey. Later in life in Southern California, I found that he had a home on Catalina Island...Larry
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:33 PM
Always a winner Larry, congratulations...
Bradfield Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:41 PM
Thank you Charlie...I'm trying to catch up to your excellent standards. ...Larry
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Larry, congratulations on your First Place win in Eve's the New/Old 2 contest! Great story. Sandra
Bradfield Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 10:39 PM
Thank you Sandra. I've been enjoying your work lately. You are a talented lady!!!..Larry
Roper Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations on you win, Larry, I truly enjoyed the story ! Hugs Eve
Bradfield Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Thank you, Eve. My pleasure to participate...Larry
Arnone Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 2:37 PM
Very nice. I enjoyed that story. Honestly, I kept thinking there was going to be some Beverly Hillbillies punch line at the end. Congrats on your placement.
Bradfield Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Thank you, Tom!!..Larry
Hoffman Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 7:57 PM
Another goodie Larry! Enjoy reading your poetry as usual!:)
Bradfield Avatar
April 21, 2016 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, Cheryl!!
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