A Story of An Angel

my life it took a turn
some one was talking 
each week when shopping 
i got a cancer scare
never said nothing
80 per cent chance

thank god
who cured me 
my mother refused to leave my side
she knew with this looming
i just did not care
my fiance dumped me 
whilst i was going to hospital
my mother knew this
i had given up in life 
god knows i tried so hard 
now i felt completely worthless
all i ever did was love someone
her knowing what i was going through 
done it like this 
it was like i was stabbed in the pain
within the head i dropped to my knees 
and roared to the heavens why do this to me
all i ever done was love someone 
i gave my everything
helped you rear your kids
you gave me one cruel end
thats another story
 i have written about
she had an affair with her boss
forgot about everyone
but her self
not ever talking thats how it ended for me
she kept asking me down to talk 
each time she lied 
caught out as her brother phoned
saying his sister my partner is having an affair
even the kids knew about before me 
i lost everything 
now i stand at the crossroads 
i will write the story 
of the beautiful angel who helped me out
her heart it touched me 
but sorry with love i was in hell
didn't want to burden anyone 
as the shoulders were laden so heavy
with internal pain in betrayal
not wishing it on anyone 
this beautiful angel was a young girl
half my age said to me once
in the time in question my head all over the place
tortured deep within love confused what did i do wrong
she came walking up to me smiling 
i was smiling back as i was pleased to see her
she put her lips to mines 
saying that she loved me 




to be continued in angel two
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:07 PM
Ow gee..you misted my eyes cause i can feel so muchl pain as you were writing this..So deep this poem is..Im sure your life is worth hundred angels.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 6:21 PM
YOU ARE GIFTED WITH SUCH A BEAUTIFUL EMOTION PLEASE I DID NOT MEAN TO DRY THOSE BEAUTIFUL EYES YOU ARE ONE BEAUTIFUL ANGEL I THANK YOU DEEPLY WONDERFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
Carrillo Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 2:00 PM
This is great I'll wait for part II.... Lucy
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 1:58 PM
LUCY THANK YOU DEEPLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED
Onclaud Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 1:33 PM
what an intriguing storyline; can't wait for the final edition, liam.. go for it..: huggs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 19, 2013 at 1:54 PM
THANK YOU KINDLY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED
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