A Story About Paint

They arrived at the fixed address and rapped on the door 
she was either sleeping or what appeared to be dead 
four eyes glued to the window, she was laying on the floor 
all around her were empty gallons of paint, OD'd on lead 

Through a smashed window they came and tried to revive 
the ambulance came and took her to the nearest hospital 
Her call came in when she was still coherent and alive 
"I need fifty gallons of paint , no this isn't a crank call"

What were they to do with fifty gallons of paint and a truck 
now that they had the afternoon off they were gonna paint 
so they went to the little church to see Father MaCulluch
we can paint this place for free then they watched him faint, 

He shrugged and said in Spanish, "Amigo, no me gusta !"
the altar lay bare and forlorn its as if Jesus was saying 
paint amigos paint, Coyotito heard an echo "estrella "
and so he painted til' the stars came out while praying 

Padre nuestro que estás en los cielos .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 10/14/2018 2:29:00 PM
Interesting story telling Pixie...
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Date: 10/13/2018 4:53:00 PM
quite intriguing, pixie... overdose of paint can kill?... huggs
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