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Night Sky Shivers In the Distance A storm is brewing, excitement coursing through Who would think calm blue water storm would brew Calm silence lull before the storm graphite sky Far away dark haunting canvas slowly creeps by Sweeping in a heart of darkness, ripping lightning forking silently then roaring boom without warning Wind revolves in the sky and sings as Mother Nature’s rave breath of howling wind blows, churning swells of waves Torrent rain cascades down as nature proudly braves whipping insane waves as it tries to make its grave Cocooned safely in its chalky painted heavy brick walls waiting to flood through any crack no matter how small Sentinel‘s ascending numerous spiral steps, veers beacon casting its beam of light an aid to seafarers 4/18/2016

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Date: 8/12/2016 1:02:00 PM
Vivid descriptive imagery! Great work, Eve! Congrats on your win! Blessings!
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Date: 8/6/2016 11:20:00 AM
One can feel the somber coming of the storm in each line of this wonderful poem, Eve. Congratulations on this well written gem! (and perfect illustration too !!)
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Date: 8/6/2016 12:44:00 AM
Eve :) Congrats on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "Little Me - Guess Who" and celebrate your win. Forever and Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:17:00 AM
Congrats Eve, for your placement in the contest, with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/18/2016 1:37:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Teddy, for your compliment and congrats. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/17/2016 3:55:00 PM
Breathtaking imagery, as in the photo that so enhances your poem! A wonderful winning entry Eve. Congratulations! #7 ; )
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Date: 5/18/2016 1:37:00 PM
Connie, thank you so very much for your compliment, 7, and congrats. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/17/2016 5:34:00 AM
Powerful imagery and metaphors, Eve! Congrats on your great win!
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Date: 5/18/2016 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Balveen, for congrats. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/17/2016 1:47:00 AM
So I wandered on a stormy night. Congrats Eve
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Date: 5/18/2016 1:39:00 PM
I love your visit to wonder during a stormy night. Thank you so very much, Anisha, for the congrats. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/16/2016 10:49:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph, congratulations to you as well. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/15/2016 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations Eve on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much,Nayda. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/15/2016 10:05:00 PM
Amazing and powerful imagery throughout your poem... I really enjoyed this very much, Eve. Great work! Congrats on a win!
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
Thank you so much,Kelly, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem and thank you for placing my poem . Hugs Eve
Date: 5/15/2016 9:11:00 PM
Great imagery in your 'storm' poem, Eve. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:27:00 PM
Thank you so much,Sandra, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading, congratulations to you as well. Hugs Eve
Date: 5/1/2016 1:54:00 AM
Wonderful poem of inspiration. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much,BK, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem and thank you for your visit. Hugs Eve
Date: 4/30/2016 8:11:00 PM
Wow I do like this one Eve, "A storm is brewing", I wish it was brewing over here, we would do anything to have a storm like that, the way you have described this storm sounds heavenly to me, thank you for this delightful read and take care........Vera
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Eve Roper
Date: 5/16/2016 8:26:00 PM
Thank you so much,Vera, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem . Hugs Eve
Date: 4/26/2016 5:20:00 PM
Great job, Eve. This one has not been judged yet, has it? So many inspired and inspiring poems in this contest!
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, wonderful compliment . Hugs Eve
Date: 4/24/2016 8:25:00 PM
This is so beautiful Eve, I have to say, you just keep getting better and better!
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Date: 5/16/2016 8:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Arthur, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem and thank you for your visit. Hugs Eve
Date: 4/24/2016 2:56:00 PM
great imagery Eve - such a vivid descriptive write ...shame it couldn't have gone in your contest and got a top spot:-):-) good luck in Kelly's contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/24/2016 4:25:00 PM
oh me too and contests like yours inspire me to stretch my creativity:-) hugs jan xx
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/24/2016 3:57:00 PM
You're so sweet, Jan, enjoyed writing this one. I'm learning! Hugs Eve
Date: 4/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
It's cool how you blended in the sentinel image with the storm brewing Great imagery, Eve!
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:30:00 AM
Your poem gathers strength as it develops dear, Eve! Excellent verses! Good luck!
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Date: 4/20/2016 4:20:00 AM
Excellent. Beautiful write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so much,Ravi, wonderful compliment I'm glad you enjoyed reading my poem and thank you for your visit. Hugs Eve
Date: 4/19/2016 8:01:00 AM
Reads like a winner...Way to go for the contest..The picture that you chose is awesome..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:54:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much wonderful compliment and the best wishes. Your poems are wonderful. Hugs Eve
Date: 4/18/2016 1:25:00 PM
eve, so quilled with your senses so alive!... exquisite write, wow.. huggs
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:52:00 AM
Nette, thank you so much wonderful for the great inspiring compliment it really means a lot to me. Hugs sweet friend
Date: 4/18/2016 1:14:00 PM
Passionate and dramatic describes the write. Enjoyed. Love, daver
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Date: 4/20/2016 9:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, Daver, wonderful compliment and stopping by and reading my poem. Hugs Eve
Date: 4/18/2016 1:02:00 PM
Very well done Eve, congratulations ahead of time...
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Eve Roper
Date: 4/20/2016 9:50:00 AM
Charlie, thank you so much wonderful compliment. Hugs Eve

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