Kurt Ravidas Poet Haibun

A Stone On the Bed of a River

Sometimes I feel like a stone on the bed of a fast-flowing mountain river: namelessness, immobility, contemplation;

nor past nor future
instantaneous rapid 
stream of illusions

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 28, 2019 at 6:59 AM ... interesting ... well done, Kurt :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Foster August 27, 2019 at 9:05 AM Wow. I was transported...then found. I could feel the calm and the water. Excellent write. Brief words weighed and measured with professional, excellence. Ann

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2019 at 5:21 PM well done, kurt. I sure like seeing these mini haibuns. I don't like reading LONG ones.

Connie Marcum Wong August 25, 2019 at 1:14 AM I can envision the sounds and scents of a cool mountain river and it is so tranquil. I love the surreal vibes in this peaceful Haibun Kurt. : ) xxoo

Line Gauthier August 24, 2019 at 10:52 AM Enjoyed your poem, Kurt.