A Sting In the Tale

Our eyes met across a crowded room
You blew me a kiss and it lifted the gloom
Strode over to me and asked me to dance
I held on tightly – wasn’t missing this chance

The attraction between us now is woken
Our eyes conversing the only words spoken
I pull you close your shapely bottom I'm clutching
Our lips so close though not yet touching.

My eyes fall upon your left hand 
There was a telltale ring sign – I didn’t understand
How could you be acting like you were really ‘free’
I don’t want to hear my wife doesn’t understand me

There is no ring because I was betrayed 
If she had been faithful I would have stayed
I won't deny it was painful but life is too short for regret
Truth I've been seeking and truth I've just met.

Well I’ve heard it a thousand times before
We’ll end up as lovers then you’ll walk out the door
I need a man that I can really trust
Not one whose eyes are simply filled with lust

It is not lust within my eyes you see 
But an appreciation of all that could be 
Feel our hearts beating chest to breast 
Allow the truth from our hearts put your fears to rest.

There is a look of honesty in your big brown eyes
I find you so attractive that fact I can't disguise
So lets take things slowly it's a chance we cannot miss
Out lips lock together in a tender kiss

Happy to take things slowly, what need have we of haste
I feel I am in heaven with my arms around your waist 
I swear I almost fainted when we sat down on the bench 
You reveal your inner passion with our kisses turning French.

Just as passion is rising my mobile phone it rings
I pause so I can answer it and the news it brings
My husband he is on his way, oh damn I forgot about him
Better dash off my love and forget this night of sin.

Written by Jan Allison & Darren Watson
6th May 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 17, 2014 at 6:23 PM
I'm not reading much these days Jadazzle, I'm not up for souping as much... XOX .Linda
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July 16, 2014 at 10:23 PM
Jadazzle, once again here you find me on your page, I'm a little late, and here you find me thanking you for the reply you left on my comment below... Thanks.. Linda
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July 17, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Hope all is well with you Linda - seeing less and less comments on the site which is such a shame but we keep plodding on regardless. Hope all is well with you. Hugs Jan xx
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June 26, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Lol!!! Hahahaha Whattttaa! Kudos!! :)
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June 26, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Thanks for dropping by Olive always a joy to get a lovely comment from you. Hugs Jan xx
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June 26, 2014 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations to the both of you!!! Enjoyed the romantic humour...and the closing stanza is the cherry on the cake! // paul
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June 26, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Paul I love the last line too a real twist to the tale! Hugs Jan xxx
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June 26, 2014 at 7:18 AM
Hi Jadazzle, following-up on my earlier comments below, I had pegged this one as a winner and I congratulate you, my friend on this well-deserved win!
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June 26, 2014 at 7:44 AM
Thanks Pandita we have great fun writing together so your comments do mean a lot to the both of us. Hugs Jan xx
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June 26, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Enjoyed the poem with the morning cup of tea. Congrats on the win
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June 26, 2014 at 1:38 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Dr Mehta. Hugs Jan xx
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June 25, 2014 at 11:36 PM
Hi Jadazzle,, Congratulations:) Enjoyed every winning poem, on my list. Thanks for the support. If you like, stop by my latest blog "Poetic symphony" . LOVE ~LINDA
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June 26, 2014 at 1:37 AM
Thanks Linda for running such brilliant contests. Hugs Jan xxx
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May 20, 2014 at 8:33 AM
Great write - I love this poem - so witty in keeping with the theme! The imagery is fantastic as I can so vividly see it all play out! Thank you for sharing this piece.
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May 20, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Thanks for the lovely comments Pandita. Hugs jan xx
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May 18, 2014 at 1:03 AM
I love the last intriguing verse Jan. Well done but do you always win. I don't know so; however, you won this one. Enjoyed... Verlena
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May 18, 2014 at 3:01 PM
I love the incredible spark Darren and I have when we write together and can't always let Darren have his wicked way so I enjoyed the twist on this one. Hugs Jan xxxx
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