A Step To the Blue Mountain

A step to the Blue Mountain,
Where airy whimsical winds singing,
Flowing love counting no certain,
That's the joy warmth You're bringing.

A step to the Blue Mountain,
Challenging as crossing the Jordan River,
Life's path is not as smooth as fountain,
Bare our foots and hearts to walk deeper.

A step to the Blue Mountain,
This lost sheep needs You're guiding,
Surrender souls and strong submitting,
Learning and correcting weakness dying.

A step to the Blue Mountain,
A thousand miles yet to be discover,
I give thanks to the One Creation,
That He never forsaken me forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 26, 2012 at 7:04 AM
I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings Melanie. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you. Love and blessings, Carol
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June 14, 2012 at 7:48 PM
melanie, enjoyed...pd
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June 14, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Glad that you did,,God bless
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