A Step Half Made

As lightening shone and thunder blew
I danced the dance that dancers do

They danced it back and asked if I
Would mind them dancing through the night

I thought no harm could come of this
Besides, such company I’ve missed

Thus, on we danced so unaware
That torrent rains beyond compare

Fell down in floods on higher ground
And like a wall came crashing down

Then somewhere in a step half made
The dance I danced was washed away

Now all that’s left for you to see:
Remains of the catastrophe

Oh, hopefully from this you’ll know
Don’t ever dance when thunder blows
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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October 23, 2013 at 7:32 PM
I like it...
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December 9, 2012 at 9:25 PM
nice
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October 18, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Jeff:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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September 8, 2012 at 8:37 PM
Congrats! A well deserved win, Jeff... Jack
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August 1, 2012 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Jeff. Love, Carol
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August 1, 2012 at 3:36 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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July 30, 2012 at 6:29 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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July 30, 2012 at 4:02 PM
awesome rhythmical poem,Jeff. Congrats on the HM.
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July 29, 2012 at 5:46 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl
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July 29, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your International win...David
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July 21, 2012 at 2:24 AM
I like your rhythm, I don't believe words in themselves are enough to make a poem, they have to have some sort of flow, or tell a story, congratulations, your poem has both.
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July 18, 2012 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Jeff. Love, Carol
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