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A Step Half Made

As lightening shone and thunder blew I danced the dance that dancers do They danced it back and asked if I Would mind them dancing through the night I thought no harm could come of this Besides, such company I’ve missed Thus, on we danced so unaware That torrent rains beyond compare Fell down in floods on higher ground And like a wall came crashing down Then somewhere in a step half made The dance I danced was washed away Now all that’s left for you to see: Remains of the catastrophe Oh, hopefully from this you’ll know Don’t ever dance when thunder blows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/23/2013 7:32:00 PM
I like it...
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Date: 12/9/2012 9:25:00 PM
nice
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:57:00 PM
Jeff:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
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Date: 9/8/2012 8:37:00 PM
Congrats! A well deserved win, Jeff... Jack
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Date: 8/1/2012 8:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/1/2012 3:36:00 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work...Sara
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Date: 7/30/2012 6:29:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/30/2012 4:02:00 PM
awesome rhythmical poem,Jeff. Congrats on the HM.
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Date: 7/29/2012 5:46:00 PM
Congrats on your awesome win. love phyl
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:09:00 PM
Jeff, congratulations on your International win...David
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Date: 7/21/2012 2:24:00 AM
I like your rhythm, I don't believe words in themselves are enough to make a poem, they have to have some sort of flow, or tell a story, congratulations, your poem has both.
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Jeff. Love, Carol
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