A Step

i took that step forward
my eyes closed
and fist clenched
you leaned in
and our lips touched
no fireworks
no butterfly's
no cliches
there was just me and you
and a million feelings i cant put into words
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Edwards Avatar
February 19, 2009 at 11:50 AM
NICE
Devonshire Avatar
February 18, 2009 at 4:37 PM
Chamonique, but you do put your feelings into words so nicely. Well done! Carolyn
Cole Avatar
February 17, 2009 at 10:51 PM
aaawww so cute and simple adorable
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