A Stellar Show

A shooting star breaks the clouds,
among racing meteors.
Evergreens stretch to catch its' tail.
as an owl hootie-hoots with glee,
at the spectacle and cricket cheers erupt,
beneath this celebratory sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 7:19 PM
Would never have known, if not for you, shooting stars had such an eager, loyal audience! You certainly have a poet's eye for the sky! ~ Gershon
Kiser Avatar
January 27, 2023 at 12:39 PM
I have loved space since I was a kid; glad you enjoyed it Gershon.
Pandit Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 1:56 PM
Enjoyed the stellar show you painted, MLK. Lovely descriptions.
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