Janaka Godevithana Poet Imagism

A Station Scene

The last passenger leaves;

last train’s sound fades,

and breeze begins to grow.

 

Tiny grass and plants

crawl railings slowly,

and in dimmed sky

shines a bright star.

 

Sun begins to glow;

first train’s sound echoes

and life takes its flow.

 

 

Dec. 11, 2020

IMAGIST any form Poetry Contest

Contest sponsor: Brian Strand

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Newton Ranaweera December 14, 2020 at 5:58 AM Congratulations, Janaka, on your great placement in Brian's premiere contest for this wonderfully beautiful paint!! Janaka Godevithana December 18, 2020 at 9:23 AM thank you sir. it is you who made me to write poems in English.

Alexis Y. December 14, 2020 at 5:07 AM Hi Janaka, Your chosen words give life to a lovely scene. Well done. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis Janaka Godevithana December 18, 2020 at 9:26 AM Thank you for your kind words.