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A State of Mind

All these memories of every kind
         My head is now filled to the brim
         Thinking that is clearly outlined
         Eaither that or a more thicker skin

      Thoughts and feelings entwined
      Quite often makes my head spin
       What's now become a daily grind
       A battle with myself I can never win

        So Longing to feel more refined
        Though one asks where do l begin
        When changing my state of mind
       And how l always feel deep within




Extra verse  it's how l often feel l find
A case of me verse him
So tired of looking behind 
Is it just down to self discipline









       this was again reworked I've TYPED UP ON SOUP INSTEAD OF TRANSFER FROM USB ANOTHER INTERPRETASION

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/15/2019 3:22:00 AM

Hi David! I havent popped on here in a good minute, but I am loving what I am seeing with your work! Thanks for stopping by to see what I've been up to. Looks like you've been busy. We can mask a lot through a smile, but we can tell a lot when we write. Love this verse, David. Take care. Always, Laura

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/2/2019 9:24:00 PM

Awesome poem -JT

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/1/2019 4:19:00 AM

Flows really well, David: I enjoyed reading it. Hope you are feeling better. SuZ

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/22/2019 12:36:00 PM

Hello David Scott, so nice to meet you. I have enjoyed your poetry. Reading your poem tells me that this is a state of mind. have a nice day my friend.