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A State of Mind

          Trying to keep up the vitage l find
            Is now waring considbaly thin
            Thoughts feelings entwined 
             Often makes my head spin

              What's become a daily grind 
             A battle with myself l can't win
             Thinking that is clearly outlined
              Eaither that or a more thicker skin

              Just for once feeling more refinded 
               A case of knowing where to begin
                If l could change my state of mind 
                And how l feel deep within









       this was again reworked I've TYPED UP ON SOUP INSTEAD OF TRANSFER FROM USB ANOTHER INTERPRETASION

Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2019

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Laura Breidenthal Date: 8/15/2019 3:22:00 AM Hi David! I havent popped on here in a good minute, but I am loving what I am seeing with your work! Thanks for stopping by to see what I've been up to. Looks like you've been busy. We can mask a lot through a smile, but we can tell a lot when we write. Love this verse, David. Take care. Always, Laura Login to Reply

Honestly J.T. Date: 8/2/2019 9:24:00 PM Awesome poem -JT Login to Reply

Suzanne Delaney Date: 8/1/2019 4:19:00 AM Flows really well, David: I enjoyed reading it. Hope you are feeling better. SuZ Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/22/2019 12:36:00 PM Hello David Scott, so nice to meet you. I have enjoyed your poetry. Reading your poem tells me that this is a state of mind. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply