A Spring Song

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July-1 -2025

Bite Size No.117 Poetry Contest.

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After the sleet and snow of winter, Life has taken a rebirth. Barren spaces, adorned in kaleidoscopic colours. Sunlight glistens, daffodils and daisies spring. The heavenly music of birds drowns the air, Bringing joy and cheer to uncounted hearts.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2025 11:06:00 PM

What a lovely spring song. Spring came and went so quickly. And I can't believe I passed up this poem until today

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/12/2025 10:02:00 AM

Dear Valsa, your beautiful verse sings a Spring song with vibrant imagery that simply cheers my heart and the grateful atmosphere now "adorned in kaleidoscopic colours." Wonderful, hopeful, enchanting poetry, my sweet friend. Indeed, the "heavenly music of birds" brings joy to all fortunate enough to hear it. Warmest wishes, your golden pen shines like fields of daffodils in the sun.. ~Susan

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/5/2025 4:59:00 PM

Dear Valsa, Your lovely verse centers on the subject of renewal and rebirth, reflecting the journey from winter into spring. It portrays the beauty of nature as it emerges from winter's hibernation, highlighting the vibrancy and joy that spring offers. The subject matter concentrates on the changing of the landscape, the appearance of flowers, and the uplifting presence of birdsong, all of which elicit feelings of optimism and happiness.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2025 9:32:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your lovely "A Spring Song" write. Great/pretty picture... "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day/weekend writing away...........