A Spring Morn

under morning sun

from tree to tree, nest to nest

hundreds of birds flit

oblivious to the chill

there is frost on my windshield




16/03/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 10:36 PM
Great tanka, Francine! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Haight Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Francine, congratulations on your fine win for your Tanka! Nice twist at the end. Hugs, Sandra
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March 22, 2015 at 1:55 PM
FRANCINE, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 9:18 PM
this one is so down to earth, Francine. I really enjoyed seeing it in my contest. Congrats for your win.
A   Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Hi Francine, Nice... nice.. One day I will master the tanka. :) LINDA
Smith Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 11:32 PM
I really like this Francine...a marvelous turn...hugs Tim
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