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A Spring Dream

noon dandelions all awash in seas of gold spring has lately sprung butterflies and bees in beauty's residences happy-go-lucky joyful greenery the songbirds are back in town calico cat naps Written on 4/20/2021 Spring Haiku Chain Poetry Contest Sponsor: M. L. Kiser

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Date: 4/27/2021 2:29:00 PM
oh that very last line, made it all so fine. I love how you ended with a cat nap!!! congrats on your win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/27/2021 3:53:00 PM
I am touched, Andrea. Thank you so much.
Date: 4/26/2021 6:52:00 PM
Delightful images in your haiku, Evelyn! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/26/2021 8:39:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. That is so nice to hear. My very best, Evelyn
Date: 4/26/2021 11:25:00 AM
Dandelions - what a wonderful choice to start your haiku string, Evelyn. They immediately evoke a picture of spring with butterflies, bees, songbirds and a napping calico cat. Truly this is a peaceful slice of a spring day beautifully, and colorfully, painted! Your use of color just inspires me my friend. Congratulations. Blessings and hug!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/26/2021 3:23:00 PM
What happy thoughts your comment inspires, Sam! Thank you for the genuine smiles. Return blessings and hug! Evelyn
Date: 4/26/2021 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/26/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/25/2021 8:56:00 PM
Such joyful images, Evelyn ~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/26/2021 3:31:00 PM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 4/22/2021 9:06:00 PM
Hi Evelyn, You've penned a lovely chain of haikus with amazing imagery. Well done. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/23/2021 10:52:00 AM
Hi Alexis, Thank you for the lovely words and kind well wishes. :D
Date: 4/22/2021 5:25:00 PM
The very last line caught me napping too, Evelyn. ~ Cheshire Cat
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/22/2021 7:44:00 PM
Smiles that linger are by far the best kind, as long as you don't lose the essence of who you are. :D
Date: 4/21/2021 5:24:00 AM
Brilliant haikus, Evelyn. Best for a win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/21/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, Victor. That makes me feel great. :D
Date: 4/20/2021 7:51:00 PM
This will rise to the top of the haikus in ML's contest I bet!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/20/2021 8:14:00 PM
Thank you so much for the vote of confidence, Caren. :D
Date: 4/20/2021 6:07:00 PM
Very lovely haikus, it’s amazing how some lignes can have plenty of spring meanings Have a great evening// Las
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/20/2021 8:20:00 PM
Thank you for the wonderful compliment. You have a lovely evening as well, Las. :D Evelyn
Date: 4/20/2021 5:57:00 PM
Nice triple set of spring haiku.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/20/2021 8:20:00 PM
Thank you, Robert. :D
Date: 4/20/2021 5:54:00 PM
Very uplifting and cheerful, Evelyn ~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/20/2021 8:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line. :D

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