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A Spring Day

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Once the crimson eastern sky lost  That was the morning guiding star. Lilac hobbit, Kismet Gem plains, and frost. Cyan sea-painted eyes to rainbows dare.  Revived ecstasy and increased optimism Sighing for you, my wingless moon vibe. The breath of trees and bushes alike a prism, sweeps away the glistening dew of the tribe. Nature as whole bows before her might. Alas, it brings harmony to the polar seasons. Even when love fades, this rib cage lights. Glowing alike rain all for the right reasons. Cephalic rooms nourish hope tame sobbing. and heals by humming the placid air. Pastel lilac buds grow with ivory twigs trembling. to sustain poise via a window-peeking stare. Ductility, time, and youth view shadows pass. Broken love's cocoon awakens at the prime dawn. and stroll through woods, leaping over cut grass. Pain larvae were spinning on the moon lawn. Despite the song's silence... to bless this ritual. Your heart begins to beat as the thorns bough. Your soul prevails over the most spiritual. I couldn't stop the peasant behind a plow. Have a snout and wings alike a winged liege. Awakened cosmic butterfly, a myth I love.  Aglow is an allusive, alluring antidote to besiege. Awaken to the bliss of silence from above. Bumblebees mood, pollinating in the haze, wildflower with a fading lavender cloud By night, savor the moon and the stars gaze. As you float over the woods, learn to be proud.
Written: February 28, 2023

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Date: 3/1/2023 2:40:00 AM
Brilliant poem, Sotto. Your Ode is of the finest poems.
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Date: 2/28/2023 3:24:00 PM
A lovely Ode to a spring day Sotto - told in the most glorious imaginative way… All the best, Belle
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Date: 2/28/2023 12:39:00 PM
Cyan sea-painted eyes -- Pastel lilac buds... beautiful words paint your poem my friend. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/28/2023 10:06:00 AM
A stunningly beautiful tribute to glorious spring. The picture is magnificent, too. This is a fave, my friend. :)
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