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A Sporkful of Surreal

usurping the scene with slurping obscene sputtering spittle and steam then spraying a particle beam that succotash was green if you know what I mean (be careful where you eat beans) 12/13/2020

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2020 12:40:00 PM

A fun one, congrats on your win. Hugs Rick. Happy New Year.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/31/2020 7:58:00 AM

I did have a ton of fun with this one! Thank you Richard! Happy New Year hugs! xomo

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/25/2020 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your big win. Hilarious!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/26/2020 10:55:00 AM

Thank you! My muse had me in stitches! xomo

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2020 5:32:00 PM

what a fantastic fun rhyme Mo many congrats on your win - love the title too:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/20/2020 11:23:00 AM

Mucho hugs and thank you Jan, I hope you and yours are well, warmest wishes! xomo

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/18/2020 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Succotash is good if it is made right. Most overcook it and do not know how to season it. Your pen was writing funnies. "Good Job" Enjoy your win with blessings........................

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2020 11:38:00 AM

My pen had a mind of its own, I just followed where it led. Thank you Paula! xomo

P.M. Richter

Date: 12/17/2020 1:23:00 PM

LOL ~ congratulations on your trophy win!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2020 7:39:00 AM

You know I had too much fun ;), Thank you! warm hugs, xomo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/16/2020 7:40:00 PM

Ah, nature's musical fruit symphony! Very clever! Very witty Mo! Congratulations on your win!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2020 7:38:00 AM

Tee hee! Thank you Sam! xomo

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2020 3:20:00 PM

WoW!Maureen, What a great write from your stellar pen. Congratulations on your top win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2020 7:38:00 AM

Thank you Alexis! I had a ridiculous amount of fun writing it ;), xomo!

Ricky Muse

Date: 12/16/2020 3:10:00 PM

Well said. Good poem. Congratulations and all the best.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/18/2020 7:34:00 AM

Contest rules stipulated have fun, I thought I had too much fun! Thank you Ricky, xomo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/16/2020 12:56:00 PM

Congrats, and God B L E S S you always :) I like succotash though

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/16/2020 2:14:00 PM

Thank you Regina! Never met a bean dish I didn’t like. Bless you, warm holiday wishes xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2020 5:16:00 AM

Love the rhyming. Hate succotash...lol

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/16/2020 6:29:00 AM

Had a whack of fun. Haven’t tried succotash... yet x!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/14/2020 1:34:00 PM

i'll bet you had as much fun writing this as i did reading it, maureen!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2020 2:19:00 PM

The rules said I had to! ;D, hugs & cheers! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/14/2020 11:41:00 AM

Well done, but it left me wondering if beans are even permitted on the Isle of Man? Aloha! Rico (the captcha code is TUM)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2020 2:20:00 PM

heh heh heh ;D,

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/14/2020 10:10:00 AM

Beans can be mean! Hope this rings Nina's machine ;)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2020 11:06:00 AM

LOL! I’m just tickled she managed to muster a movement from my muse ;), xomo!

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/14/2020 4:35:00 AM

suffering succotash well done Mo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/14/2020 7:18:00 AM

Suffering indeed lol! Thankya! HUGS

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/13/2020 9:04:00 PM

Thanks for the hilarity, dear friend!... Also, your title brings back a fond memory: I was teaching ESL to rank beginners a couple of decades ago. I was teaching them the words 'spoon' and 'fork.' I then held up a spoon and asked the class 'What's this? --Everyone shouted out: 'Spork!' I'm still laughing!. Season's best, Maureen. :) Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 12/13/2020 9:18:00 PM

Thank you! Nina brings out the beasty best in me ;), Sporks are real, now I know where they come from! Warmest wishes to you too Gershon, xomo!