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A Sporkful of Surreal

usurping the scene
with slurping obscene 
sputtering spittle and steam
then spraying a particle beam
that succotash was green
if you know what I mean

(be careful where you eat beans)



12/13/2020

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 12/30/2020 12:40:00 PM A fun one, congrats on your win. Hugs Rick. Happy New Year. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/31/2020 7:58:00 AM I did have a ton of fun with this one! Thank you Richard! Happy New Year hugs! xomo

Caren Krutsinger Date: 12/25/2020 12:46:00 PM Congratulations on your big win. Hilarious! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/26/2020 10:55:00 AM Thank you! My muse had me in stitches! xomo

Jan Allison Date: 12/19/2020 5:32:00 PM what a fantastic fun rhyme Mo many congrats on your win - love the title too:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/20/2020 11:23:00 AM Mucho hugs and thank you Jan, I hope you and yours are well, warmest wishes! xomo

Paula Goldsmith Date: 12/18/2020 8:32:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Succotash is good if it is made right. Most overcook it and do not know how to season it. Your pen was writing funnies. "Good Job" Enjoy your win with blessings........................ Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2020 11:38:00 AM My pen had a mind of its own, I just followed where it led. Thank you Paula! xomo

P.M. Richter Date: 12/17/2020 1:23:00 PM LOL ~ congratulations on your trophy win! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2020 7:39:00 AM You know I had too much fun ;), Thank you! warm hugs, xomo

Sam Kauffman Date: 12/16/2020 7:40:00 PM Ah, nature's musical fruit symphony! Very clever! Very witty Mo! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2020 7:38:00 AM Tee hee! Thank you Sam! xomo

Alexis Y. Date: 12/16/2020 3:20:00 PM WoW!Maureen, What a great write from your stellar pen. Congratulations on your top win. Have a great day;-) Alexis Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2020 7:38:00 AM Thank you Alexis! I had a ridiculous amount of fun writing it ;), xomo!

Ricky Muse Date: 12/16/2020 3:10:00 PM Well said. Good poem. Congratulations and all the best. Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/18/2020 7:34:00 AM Contest rules stipulated have fun, I thought I had too much fun! Thank you Ricky, xomo

Regina Mcintosh Date: 12/16/2020 12:56:00 PM Congrats, and God B L E S S you always :) I like succotash though Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/16/2020 2:14:00 PM Thank you Regina! Never met a bean dish I didn’t like. Bless you, warm holiday wishes xomo

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/16/2020 5:16:00 AM Love the rhyming. Hate succotash...lol Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/16/2020 6:29:00 AM Had a whack of fun. Haven’t tried succotash... yet x!

Ilene Bauer Date: 12/14/2020 1:34:00 PM i'll bet you had as much fun writing this as i did reading it, maureen! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/14/2020 2:19:00 PM The rules said I had to! ;D, hugs & cheers! xomo

Rico Leffanta Date: 12/14/2020 11:41:00 AM Well done, but it left me wondering if beans are even permitted on the Isle of Man? Aloha! Rico (the captcha code is TUM) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/14/2020 2:20:00 PM heh heh heh ;D,

Michelle Faulkner Date: 12/14/2020 10:10:00 AM Beans can be mean! Hope this rings Nina's machine ;) Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/14/2020 11:06:00 AM LOL! I’m just tickled she managed to muster a movement from my muse ;), xomo!

Mark Koplin Date: 12/14/2020 4:35:00 AM suffering succotash well done Mo! Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/14/2020 7:18:00 AM Suffering indeed lol! Thankya! HUGS

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/13/2020 9:04:00 PM Thanks for the hilarity, dear friend!... Also, your title brings back a fond memory: I was teaching ESL to rank beginners a couple of decades ago. I was teaching them the words 'spoon' and 'fork.' I then held up a spoon and asked the class 'What's this? --Everyone shouted out: 'Spork!' I'm still laughing!. Season's best, Maureen. :) Gershon Login to Reply Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 12/13/2020 9:18:00 PM Thank you! Nina brings out the beasty best in me ;), Sporks are real, now I know where they come from! Warmest wishes to you too Gershon, xomo!