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In this write i do not claim to have been in Hell.' Yet i guess i picked up the ambience of some of the afterlife quite Strange events were befire me.)

A splinterd array '

Just a write on hell..Alright.!! It
 came from my dreams such scenes.? Last night!
I was trying to reach my dead grandfather
It was like he was alive while i slept.? 
There were no perameters when i was there
Just striving, false hope and advice from
Strangers it was strange.' I feel drained and confused more than rather.! After i woke i realised the finality of death.' And how small are we.' No matter our currsnt
Roles.? Where we lead? Of are led i remember being told he is not to be found
As i chose to crawl on crushed glass till
That statement would be proven un-sound.' I then awoke..' To the light of day that was an hour ago now so fresh enough hey.? So the earlier write waa drawn from last nights
 dream maybe a
Close enough glimpse of what hell really
Means.?
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Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 11:38 PM
riveting images pound on this page...good job, joe
Maverick Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:17 AM
Its what i remembered Nette Such is life as Ned Kelly uttered and also death i myself now guess.'
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