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A Splendid Day

An old plaid blanket surrounds us, as we sit under the oak cross legged. sipping on homemade lemonade and watching the grass sway. We take our sandwiches from there bags and reminisce about our day. We laugh and cut up. While nosy bees dip down close to our sweet ice-cream bars we swat gently towards them because the ice-cream is ours. The sun slowly starts to wave good bye to us as we pack up. Our bare toes slip through the green grass as we head back. I love days like this when life is easy.. I'll make sure to comeback.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/20/2011 11:37:00 PM
This is so simple and sweet. And realistically portrayed. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:10:00 AM
But for the bees, it sounds like a perfect picnic, Roxanna. Congratulations on your success in Carol's Picnic Contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:26:00 PM
Roxanna, congrats on your HM in the contest of Carol.
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Date: 5/18/2011 6:09:00 PM
Roxanna, good to see you Honorably Mentioned with this great one. Congratulations on your poem's honored success. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congrats on your HM, Roxy. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 5/18/2011 7:13:00 AM
My congratulations on this HM win in the contest of carol, Roxanna
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:21:00 AM
Congrats Roxanna on your HM in the picnic contest with this delightful write luv.. enjoy your special honor for excellence...
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem placing in my contest Roxanna. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/6/2011 5:43:00 PM
Surely sounds like a splendid day, where troubles and worries seem far away. Well penned, Roxanna! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind words on my poem. Caroline. :)
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Date: 5/6/2011 1:25:00 PM
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Date: 5/6/2011 6:58:00 AM
cute and light
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