A Splash of Love

Waves lap at their feet
As they enjoy the sunset
Walking hand in hand
Framed by love's warm silhouette
As the sun kisses the sea

Tanka 2 Contest
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Hunjeri Avatar
March 30, 2015 at 4:27 AM
Cheers to romance! Congrats.
Callus Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 10:44 AM
I love the romantic image you created here, Joseph. Very enjoyable Tanka #7. Congrats on a fine win. // paul
A   Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 1:57 PM
JOSEPH, Congratulations on your awesome TANKA 2 win Always & Forever <3 Luv ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Hey, Joseph. Tanka do not really have titles, but I really found the title you gave this adorable. This is sweet. Congrats. (Wish you would not capitalize the lines of your tanka!)
May Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 10:43 PM
Thank you for my placement Andrea..
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 3:51 AM
- Sweet and romantic, Joseph! - I wish you a beautiful spring day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:39 PM
Wonderful imagery of love that "splashes" from daylight through sunsets, twilight and in the light of the moon. Best wishes for the contest. Sandra
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 4:18 PM
a touching write..keep bringing it and god bless you
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