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A Spirit Leaves the Body Seeking Eternity

A Spirit Leaves the Body Seeking Eternity A Spirit leaves the body while crying aloud as Cursing blind hate enters without conscience A Hell for the wicked casting names as called Tears of love weeping in sorrow and anguish Dripping red from the heart beating so dear Devouring feelings eating into emotions I laugh so To stop the weeping stirring in deep rocks below Echoing waves of turbulence and such gale force Inside one soulful cry sounds in a whispered dream Begging, desiring to move on from this mortal coil! But pray tell—must wicked negation like this be Ever so, if so, then why so?? Man-made negation, negativity should never be Allowed and the soulful cry must be heard, answered Divine intervention, angelic powers to the rescue! A Spirit leaving the body—a solemn event it is There is no place for such mortal wickedness in this Instance as the Spirit begins it transformative ascent Toward the Heavens and the power of the Almighty Shall answer in kind those mortals who bring their Perfidy to this most wondrous process that severs The mortal bonds of the Earth dimension as the Spirit moves on in its new found state and presence As Peace and Happiness envelop it soothingly and pure Preparing it for God’s most precious embrace into Eternity! Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (January 6, 2015) (Free Verse)

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/11/2015 2:30:00 PM

These lines are so beautiful and so comforting. I don't think that we have to fear death as much as we do. I see it as a very natural and peaceful part of living. I believe that it is just a transition to another chapter of life... Both of you have put your hearts and souls into this poem and the result is very moving. Great work, Gary and Liam!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/14/2015 6:24:00 PM

kelly thank you kindly for the amazing beautiful comment i am sure gary would agree yeah i look at our deeds are a reflection of our true self i think bonds formed carry forever peace knowing the truth of everlasting beauty yeah we did put our hearts and souls into it bless yo dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/9/2015 5:50:00 AM

Death is one of my most favorable subject that is why I was attracted to this profound poem of yours that certainly will make the wicked shiver! Powerful work you both have created that will make many ponder for that moment! Congratulations to both of you: Lary and Liam, Liam and Lary! I have written two poems " Life in Eternity" and "The Crossing" Have a look if time allows.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/10/2015 2:28:00 PM

smiling demetrios i read the crossing powerful pen very inspiring dear friend a pleasure to read thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/9/2015 10:48:00 AM

Demetrios!! Happy New Year!! Thanks for your note here. I know that Liam is kind of behind in his replies. It's quite easy to get backlogged with the comments and all. (I posted our same co-write here earlier on January 6.) I am sure that Liam will be replying to you later. I know we both always appreciate your comments. I will take a look later this PM at the two poems you've mentioned above. I just posted one myself earlier this PM: "Making You Happy My Precious Love." Enjoy. Best Always, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/8/2015 9:48:00 AM

Hi Gary and Liam! Very powerful pens you've written here my dearest friends. Very interested subject to really write about, the afterlife! Great subject indeed! Well done!.smiling.Your pens are solid golden as always!A 7 +++ for each of you! I wish you both the very best in 2015! Have a very lovely day! God bless you both always! :) Love and hugs! Xoxox D.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/10/2015 2:23:00 PM

thank you dear friend for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/9/2015 10:51:00 AM

Dearest "D" -- Thanks so much for your wonderful comments here. (You may have already commented on the earlier post I made of our co-write here.) I'm sure that Liam will be replying later to you too!! Thanks as always -- and all the Best!! Gary (XOXOXO)

David Meade

Date: 1/8/2015 7:54:00 AM

Outstanding write you two!! You all have strong and vibrate spirits . . . a God-hug, now that sounds incredibly wonderful! Ways to go guys. 7

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 1/9/2015 1:31:00 PM

the two of us david has a bit of leprechaun magic in us thank you pal smiling for the wonderful comment bless you

Gary Bateman
Date: 1/9/2015 10:53:00 AM

Hello David, "Green Leaf" replying first here. BTW, Happy New Year!! I'm very pleased you liked our co-written effort. I will you all the best with your poetry for 2015!! (I'm sure Liam will be replying to you later here as well.) Best Always, Gary