Audrey Haick Poet Monoku

A Speck of Flame

eternal love arrived… speck of flame spreading wild fire engulfing all time
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Note:  #3 in series of 24 Monokus reflecting the holy season of Christmas!
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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire December 18, 2010 at 12:19 PM Dear Audrey, "engulfing all time" I can envision the GLORY of these Words Superb Write LOVE, YOUR Liege (ALWAYS). ..HG

David Smalling December 10, 2010 at 9:44 AM This is the thing beauty ... a subtle telling of all faith. All the best in the contest, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2010 at 12:58 PM I like this one even better. splendid, Audrey!

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2010 at 10:26 AM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Audrey. Hope to be reading it for a long time to come. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol

Joy Wellington December 6, 2010 at 8:37 PM For a moment there I thought this was about earthly love, so I got all fired up, yes love is in the air!!! Then I realize that it was about heavenly love, yes! Fired up about that too, just thought...What can a speck of flame do? Lots! Thanks as always for your comments and congrats. Love you much, Joy (Jew)

Matthew Anish December 6, 2010 at 7:42 PM Sounds good to me! Hope you have a joyous holiday season. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

C.C Bloomsfield December 6, 2010 at 3:07 PM This one goes tmfvs. .Fantastic.

Dr.Ram Mehta December 6, 2010 at 1:23 PM Nicely expressed thought on the holiday, Good luck, Audrey

Carolyn Devonshire December 6, 2010 at 11:38 AM Beautiful words and layout, Dimples! Be sure to enter one of your monokus in Constance's contest. It's filling up fast. And thank you for your kind words. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick December 6, 2010 at 11:16 AM Okay, don't know if for the contest..Good one in this one line...Yes, that Christmas birth long ago was the wildfire..You kind review of my work lifted my spirits.Sara

James Peranteau December 6, 2010 at 11:03 AM A thought provoking write here Audrey ! And I will be looking forward to reading your future Monoku's ! much love, james