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A Special Place

You're hotter than the sun, Brighter than the moon, You shine like a star Even in the afternoon! I would take you on a journey. We would go through space. Alone we would travel To a special place! When we come there, We wouldn't be on Mars. The place I would take you Is among the shiny stars!

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/22/2024 12:46:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/15/2016 12:30:00 PM

NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN. LINDA

Skat A

Date: 11/15/2015 11:56:00 PM

:) SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/19/2015 9:02:00 PM

Matej, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 1:13:00 PM

Matej,, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"