Sandy Tadros Poet Couplet

A Special Letter

Sorry that the postman didn't come today;
To deliver you a letter I wish not to be delay'd,
But I sent the birds to give it to you.
In the sky they held it, and above they flew.
It happened that the letter was blown
It rested on a lost ship with the flown,
But the man there began to acclaim 
Because they were your candles that flam'd
And up he gets to your house
To tell you by the bones of his mouth:
Happy Birthday.

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Faraz Ajmal August 22, 2017 at 8:19 AM Such a beautiful written poem, I mainly like it because of the imaginations you ve put in this poem, secondly your feelings are prettu clear, I can see that how important that person is to you, a very touching poem, well can you do me a favour, can you plz read my poems also and tell me how they are, I ll really appreciate it

Ayesha Karim June 21, 2015 at 10:04 PM This poem is humorous!

Arthur Vaso May 30, 2015 at 12:27 AM I surely did not guess the last line, beautiful poem, and a quite frankly I dream one day of such a letter! Sandy Tadros May 30, 2015 at 12:31 AM Thank you :) And actually, we are all waiting for such a letter :')

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2015 at 12:05 PM a touching write. Sandy, I enjoyed the words you decided to use to rhyme in each set of couplets. LINDA Sandy Tadros May 28, 2015 at 3:19 PM Thanks a lot! I am trying my best :)

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 5:57 PM Sandy, Enjoyed reading one of your latest poems, Hugs SKAT" Sandy Tadros May 28, 2015 at 4:25 AM Thanks :')

Kevin Leake May 27, 2015 at 10:45 AM Loved this piece Sandy, A nice enjoyable write Best Wishes Kevin Sandy Tadros May 27, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thank you so much! :)