A Special Feeling

I am overwhelmed with a feeling,
One special feeling is love.
I went through a cleansing ritual,
When love got into the blood.

I'm taking a step toward you,
You're already two ahead of me.
I'll pretend not to notice,
That you beat me in that, too.

I look at you and smile,
I see your tender gaze,
I know for sure that I am not mistaken
In the faithfulness of your vows.

I won't be alone anymore
And you agree with all of this,
And as if two streams merged
Energy from different chips.

I know what's already in your soul,
And of course you know that, too.
It probably sounds like a cliche,
But you're the only one who understands me.

Our feelings are very sincere,
They will build a fortress around us.
Two identical letters in the name
We will be bound more tightly than in heaven.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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May 24, 2020 at 1:11 PM
Hello Tamara Gabiel, I find this poem so romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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