A Spec On a Screen

i attempt to take a breath as structure slips away,
two lips and a whisper changed a universe today,

patterns contort and minds tilt ajar,
my soul is dumbfounded in sight of this art,


head in the clouds, where home isn't far,
seems ages away, knee deep in the stars,

i know not, the language,
i can not define,
but i know that its coming,
it's growing, it's mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:38 PM
Creative and very interesting expressions, ellis
Mist Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 6:22 AM
head in the clouds..lol...i know what that feels like at times
Sweetheart Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 5:41 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry .. hope u have fun on PS as u share with others with luv..
Zzzzz Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Congratulations! You must be looking forward to the big day!
Cobb Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:58 AM
thank you! its due December 10th. and thanks for being the first to comment anything of mine on here. i found this site just today, i wrote this particular poem only a few hours ago.
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