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A Sparkle

Sunlight is described on the space where it lays The sun beams is what lands here and there throughout A warm feeling is expressed in some fine ways There’s a sparkle like a jewel all about Even the tree branches ignite with great pride Everything around has surely come alive The pollen glows within the light breezeless air A calmness exists in excess everywhere Russell Sivey Contest: Here comes the sun ... Sponsor: Francine Roberts 2/1/2014

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Robert Rogers

Date: 2/5/2014 4:03:00 PM

RS, the imagery in, "The pollen glows within the light breezeless air", for me is very profound, 'cause I am ever staring at the swarming pollen as the sun's rays illuminate them"! Very graphic, LOVE IT!//Sinclair

Jack Horne

Date: 2/2/2014 10:11:00 AM

a sure winner here, Russell - have a great week, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2014 9:57:00 PM

this is very nice . Is it for the new contes on yellow? It sparkles like sunshine.

Russell Sivey
Date: 2/1/2014 10:39:00 PM

No, I didn't know there was a contest on yellow. I'll have to look at the rules and find out if this qualifies, thanks for informing me.

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/31/2014 6:32:00 PM

Light and bright words... gives me a warm feeling !! Enjoyed your wonderful poem !!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2014 11:45:00 AM

this melody is as bright as the light you speak of, russell... seems you are weaving an anthology on nature...what a scintillating work!... hugggs

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/31/2014 11:30:00 AM

Great one Russel, I really like this. Imagine: '' A calmness exists in excess...'' A job well done, kudos Russel. Kayod5.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 1/31/2014 4:25:00 AM

deep thoughts and feelings here Russell that lift and delight the spirit Shadow x smile hug