Russell Sivey Poet Rispetto

A Sparkle

Sunlight is described on the space where it lays
The sun beams is what lands here and there throughout
A warm feeling is expressed in some fine ways
There’s a sparkle like a jewel all about
Even the tree branches ignite with great pride
Everything around has surely come alive
The pollen glows within the light breezeless air
A calmness exists in excess everywhere

Russell Sivey

Contest: Here comes the sun ...
Sponsor: Francine Roberts

2/1/2014

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Robert Rogers February 5, 2014 at 4:03 PM RS, the imagery in, "The pollen glows within the light breezeless air", for me is very profound, 'cause I am ever staring at the swarming pollen as the sun's rays illuminate them"! Very graphic, LOVE IT!//Sinclair

Jack Horne February 2, 2014 at 10:11 AM a sure winner here, Russell - have a great week, my friend : )

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2014 at 9:57 PM this is very nice . Is it for the new contes on yellow? It sparkles like sunshine. Russell Sivey February 1, 2014 at 10:39 PM No, I didn't know there was a contest on yellow. I'll have to look at the rules and find out if this qualifies, thanks for informing me.

Debra Squyres January 31, 2014 at 6:32 PM Light and bright words... gives me a warm feeling !! Enjoyed your wonderful poem !!

Nette Onclaud January 31, 2014 at 11:45 AM this melody is as bright as the light you speak of, russell... seems you are weaving an anthology on nature...what a scintillating work!... hugggs

Kayod5 Kayode January 31, 2014 at 11:30 AM Great one Russel, I really like this. Imagine: '' A calmness exists in excess...'' A job well done, kudos Russel. Kayod5.

Shadow Hamilton January 31, 2014 at 4:25 AM deep thoughts and feelings here Russell that lift and delight the spirit Shadow x smile hug